Forgetful Angel Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I don't know if I'm any good at single cards, but here we go. [align=center] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending the top 8 cards in your Deck to the Graveyard. There can only be 1 face-up "Alzmex The Eternal Reaper" on the field. When this card declares an attack, remove from play 2 cards in your opponent's hand. This card gains 200 ATK for each card removed from play by this card's effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove from play 4 cards in your Graveyard. If you do not, this card is destroyed. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Schitzofrenic Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I cannot say if it is UP or OP or Balanced, but is probably balanced, nice very nice 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 pic is very good 10 cards discarded is a bit too high of a cost though stats could be slightly higher too 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 pic is very good 10 cards discarded is a bit too high of a cost though stats could be slightly higher too 7/10 True but it gains 200 ATK because you remove 2 cards from your opponentshand, and it doesn't require a tribute. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Very good indeed. You are progressing well. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending the top 8 (Same number as level) cards in your Deck to the Graveyard. There can only be 1 face-up "Alzmex The Eternal Reaper" on the field. When this card declares an attack, remove from play 2 cards in your opponent's hand. This card gains 200 ATK for each card removed from play by this card's effect. During each of your Standby Phases, remove from play 5 cards in your Graveyard. If you do not, this card is destroyed. (I've tried to balance it and make it less of a burn; and re-arranged the effect to how it should be.) 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Thank you very much, I wwas actually kinda afraid to join this site at first, since their is so much negativity toward newbs. I'm glad I did though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leonarage Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Impressive,very impressive! I think that it is a bit UP though, but although it is somewhere near balanced. DOn't change anything though, it is great! Check your PM! Overall: 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 OCG is not perfect and pic is kinda unimpressive, I like the effect but it is a bit UPed but the name is good 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 good card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Thank you, I'm kinda surprised so many people liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Nice job a little too much of a cost but 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
souske88 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Great card, love the image! A big too high star value though. Rating:1 - 32 - 2.53 - N/A4 - N/A5 - 16 - 0.8 Total: 7.3/10 You first try? Superb job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Kinda Messed Up On the OCG. 8.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Thank you, I'm not very good with OCG. I just do my best :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JrockerAngel7 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Wow, i'm impressed by this card. Very nice, love the effect. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Good card, I'm not really a fan of the image, the OCG is fine, and the effect is interesting. I wouldn't call it entirely useful though, being as it relies on the fact that you can send cards to the Graveyard frequently just to keep this card on the field. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechnoDoomedOne Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 A bit underpowered though if you don't play a deck with many cards or a Lightsworn deck. However, great card... Balanced enough, can deal great damage to your opponent's hand and when attacks will have a total of 2400 ATK (the same as most Level 6 monsters). If this is your first card, then allow me to tell you this: you're a very good at this kind of things. Great job! Originality - 7/10Balance - 7/10Effect - 10/10Support - 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 While it's not my first card it's my first single card. All my other cards had a theme. This one functions own it's own with out any special made supports or anything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Hmm... It's a pretty good card, but I would say instead of removing cards from your opponent's hand every time it attacks, change it to every time it deals battle damage or something. Otherwise your opponent looses cards even if they use Negate Attack or Mirror Force. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Deadpool Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Great card Ill give you a.....9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 wow. the card is balanced and the effect is creative. excellent job. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
froggiewyatt Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 good card but 10 cards sent to the graveyard that is bad other then that good card 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 This is a great card. I'd say its pretty fairly balanced. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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