+sw.DISZ Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I like the way that came out. The concept was Altair executing to the Joker for his crimes as punishment. The lights are supposed to signify fireflies or something. A random plane battle up in the air as two jets destroy another jet. Stock was a photo taken by a friend. WIP, concept is the Trooper coming out of smoke from a battle, tall grass and fireflies (again) around him. Moon and space/stars were two separate stocks. The smoke effect was scratched. Meant to be more of a large tag than an actual LP. Any suggestions for this one would be nice. :] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Azmodius Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 I like these. One suggestion though, in the second one the fireflies don't look to great, but decent. Maybe make more and make them smaller. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemniscate Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Remove the fireflies in the first one. Fireflies only come out at night, so they just look out of place. Nice job though. ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 27, 2009 Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Colours, lightning blend, Composition all need work.Work on them [: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 27, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 27, 2009 Colours' date=' lightning blend, Composition all need work.Work on them [:[/quote'] I thought all that, save the composition which I agree needs work, was pretty nice on the first. Any ideas? Thanks guys. Still need suggestions for the second. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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