DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 which 1 xD pic 1 or pic 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 the first one, my computer for some reason couldn't load the 2nd pic that time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 ok i did something esle with the 1st picwhat you think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 you misspelled destroy, but other than that it's fine, effect not very creative though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 crap xD well its just an equip card what you except xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 *shrugs* I still expected more than just merely 400 atk gain Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 ok i'll give it another effect if that makes you happy xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 you do that, then I'll boost the rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 ok heres the update version (very long effect) This card can only be equipped to a WATER Machine-Type monster. A monster equipped with this card gains 400 ATK and DEF. If the monster equipped to this card would be destroyed destroy this card instead. The monster equipped with this card gains 1 of the following effects according to the number of WATER Machine-Type monsters on your side of the field.* 1 : This card cannot be destroyed in battle.*2 : This card can attack your opponent directly. When it does so using this effect, any Battle Damage it inflicts to your opponent is halved.*3: Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. During the turn you activate this effect the monster equipped with this card cannot attack.*4: Once per turn, destroy up to 2 Spell or Trap cards on the field. During the turn you activate this effect you cannot activate any Spell or Trap cards.*5: Send this card to the Graveyard to destroy all cards on the field except the monster that was equipped with this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 now that is MUCH better of an effect, so I'll raise the rate to 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 new probably uncreative card XDWhile there is another WATER Machine-Type monster on your side of the field you can Special Summon this card from your hand. Only 1 "FST-005 - Sea Destoryer Unit" can be Special Summoned per turn. Once per turn, Tribute 1 WATER Machine-Type monster to destory 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. During the turn you activate this effect this card cannot attack. new card added to post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarknessBoy32 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Nice Job...Well some are a little overpowered.Little tini tiny OCG errors.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Which ones seem a little OPedand can you please piont out the OCG errors it would be appreciated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 only Sea Destroyer Unit's pic is uncreative, the rest look just fine 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 i already know that xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Then I will keep checking this for further updates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 ok im working on the CY cards now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 OCG looks good, fine effects but Mashiu needs a background. Otherwise, Good Job! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 OCG looks good' date=' fine effects but Mashiu needs a background. Otherwise, Good Job! 7.5/10[/quote'] i do not have the software to do this <.< Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 pretty good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 new card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 wow! i love water monsters!! the cards are great and the effects are good. i dont see any important OCG error. for me....9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 keep going on this thread, I want to see more updates Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 new card This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card is also treated as a Fish-Type monster. Once per turn, select 1 WATER Machine-Type monster on your side of the field. That monster can attack your opponent directly. When it does so using this effect, any Battle Damage it inflicts to your opponent is halved. During the turn you activate this effect this card cannot attack. Once per turn, Tribute 2 WATER Machine-Type monsters on your side field than this card can attack your opponent's Life Pionts directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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