The Greatness Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Well this is one of my cards that you guys can call, "Immortal". But, this is one of my first cards and here's the background of it first: There was a boy named, "Bernard Longcape", a boy who dreamed of excitement. And one day his excitement became real when his father gave him a duel monster, a real duel monster. He had only seen them on TV in tournaments, but never seen one in person. When his dad gave him this card, his dad a few words to follow the gift, "This card is very rare. There's only one in the whole universe.... Duel monsters go beyond this world and when you battle do not tell anyone this but... this card is the guardian of the Milky Way Galaxy, that's why it is so strong and has the name, "Validus of Milkyway".... My father gave me this, when he went exploring from the banned cards in Egypt. So here's one of them." Speechless, the boy thanked him with a hug..." That's just a part of the story and sorry if it wasn't entertaining.. Oh and the set will be called, "The Banned Cards of Egypt, the Tasmanian Duel Monsters". And of course this won't be included in the card's name but they will have the same first part of their Set I.D.: DMOT (Duel Monsters of Tasmania. The story will be posted with the card set, when I have finished it. ). And note, that there are going to be at least 10 cards in the set and they are not all guardians of a galaxy. Now, enough talk here's what you clicked for (there is a tuner card special for this one that will be released in the set post): Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TechnoDoomedOne Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 I really like your Synchro monster, very good card and effect. However, I think 4000 ATK are more than enough to even increasing it with the card's effect (and you're talking about 5000 ATK). Nevertheless, great Synchro, and I really like the plotline and the Card's art. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Thanks and I might consider making a fanfic for it instead.... Spoiler is in slanted and underlined text: It was banned for being so strong, that will go into detail in the longer part of the story. Ok, well just reply yes or no if I should make a fanfic that will go more into the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 you have good OCG card is good but lower the ATK & DEF a bit its OPed but pretty good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 atk/def is too high, tune it down OCG looks solid, effect is slightly on the OPed end 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 The updated version and thanks for the correction and help!: Oh and please reply answers to whether or not, I should start a Fanfiction book about these cards and Bernard Longcape. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AfterBurner™ Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 It's a good card is like it and plus the backstory is reli cool, you should make a fan fic for this8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 with the new version I'll raise the rate to 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 rate please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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