Relapse. Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 After viewing many cards in YCM, I made a card myself. I hope I have no OCG errors, which I see a lot of cards have. But yet, I see some that are nearly prefect, so I used those examples to make...MY FIRST CARD! The Effect: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you may search your deck for a LIGHT monster with 4 stars or less. When that effect is activated, this card cannot attack during the turn that effect was activated. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200 for every LIGHT monster on your side of the field (excluding this card). When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, return this card to your Hand. Please rate, and try not to spam. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairo Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 That's a good card great indeed for a first try I'LL GIVE YOU 8.5/10 I rated you 3 stars... perhaps you may want to check out my thread " Demons Cards". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Umm, "Search a LIGHT Monster". Do you mean find 1 and summon it or just...look at it?! Unimpressive pic and not very creative effect. OCG look pretty good. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Relapse. Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Thanks guys. And I actually meant I would Special Summon it, but I forgot to add it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pikachu Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 I am surprised you could make such a good card. Just remember to fix the 'deck' error. 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Deucalion Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster that you control. Once per turn, you can search your Deck for a LIGHT monster with 4 stars or less, and Special Summon it. This card cannot attack during the turn in which this effect is activated. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200 for every LIGHT monster that you control (excluding this card). If this card is destroyed by battle, return this card to your hand. That would be the correct version of the OCG. The art doesn't particularly fit the YuGiOh feel that well, either. I'm thinking 6/10 here, but don't be discouraged, it is much better than most first tries out there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 good.. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Namo™ Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Now this is a true fix! This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster on your side of the field. Once per turn, you can search your deck for a level 4 or lower LIGHT monster and Special Summon it to your side of the field, this card cannot attack during the turn this effect was activated. Increase this card's ATK and DEF by 200 for every LIGHT monster on your side of the field (excluding this card). When this card is would be destroyed as a result of battle, return it to your Hand instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 I really like your card and your very good for being a newbie. To harness your skills more and to become better I would suggest this Club for you, as a proud member I say it gives newbies a very welcoming place to be. Newb Defense League Card gets an 8/10 for me ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VolTama Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 I can't tell you anything new that other people already have. This card is great despite being your first. Keep it up. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster on your side of the field. Once per turn' date=' you can [b']Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower LIGHT monster from your Deck[/b]. If you do, this card cannot attack during your Battle Phase. Increase the ATK and DEF of this card by 200 for each LIGHT monster on your side of the field, excluding this card. If this card would be destroyed by battle, return it to your hand instead. OCG errors fixed. Like Forgetful Angel said, this is impressive. And like F.A. said, you should join the Newb Defense League. If you do, you will be able to improve your already evident skills. Click the link in my sig. \/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 well balanced of an effect, OCG looks solid Not sure what to make of the pic though, could be slightly better 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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