A few of my cards

[Awai]

Hey, I'm new here and I figured for my 1st post I would show 1 each of Monster, Spell, and Trap. I'll be posting my Archtypes after this.

 

Monster Reacher

 

Attribute: Dark

Type: Fiend/Tuner

Level:3

ATK:700

DEF:900

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, your opponent must reveal 1 random card in their hand. If it is a monster, special summon it to your side of the field in face-up defense position. It cannot be tributed and it's effects are negated.

 

 

 

Party Item

Normal Spell

 

Select 1 equip spell card on the field that has the effect of increasing or decreasing ATK and equip it to al monsters you control considered correct targets until the end phase. This turn, monsters you control cannot inflict battle damage.

 

 

 

Battle Scayther

Normal Trap

 

When your opponent has a face-up monster on the field you can activate this card. Select 1 monster on your side of the field. Itcan attack directly this turn. After the selected monster attacks, it's attack becomes 0 and it must battle with the strongest monster on your opponent's side of the field.

 

 

 

Please rate and/or comment.

[玄魔の王]

I'm confused. Why did you post pictures of the artless cards when you had the text already here?

 

Monster Reacher looks overpowered, as it's an instant Synchro Summon most times. Party Item defies the rules, since Equip Spells can only be equipped to 1 monster. You could switch it to just apply that effect to all monsters you control. And battle Scyther is pointless unless it's in a Yubel Deck, and even then it's still pointless. And worst of all, its own effect defies itself (it can attack directly but MUST attack their biggest monster).

 

On these cards: 6/10.

[Awai]

Ok, i just realized the OCG error with Battle Scayther, was supposed to mean attack directly first, then attack the strongest monster on your opponent's side of the field. Party Item's effect does only apply to monsters I control. As for Monster Reacher, the only way I can think of making it more balanced right now is to have its effect activate only when it's summoned.

[玄魔の王]

You wrote al, so I thought you meant "all". Make those edits and I will rerate them.

[Awai]

Ok these are the edits

 

Monster Reacher

 

Attribute: Dark

Type: Fiend/Tuner

Level:3

ATK:700

DEF:900

 

When this card is normal summoned, your opponent must reveal 1 random card in their hand. If it is a monster, special summon it to your side of the field in face-up defense position. It cannot be tributed and it's effects are negated.

 

 

Party Item

Normal Spell

 

Select 1 equip spell card on the field that has the effect of increasing or decreasing ATK and equip it to all monsters that you control considered correct targets until the end phase. This turn, monsters you control cannot inflict battle damage.

 

 

Battle Scayther

Normal Trap

 

When your opponent has a face-up monster on the field you can activate this card. Select 1 monster on your side of the field. It can attack directly this turn. After the selected monster attacks, it's attack becomes 0 and it must battle with the monster your opponent controls with the highest ATK.

[玄魔の王]

Everything is fine now, but you should just edit your original post to put in the fixed lore.

[.Leo]

they are pretty good.

~8.4/10~