my first cards kingdom hearts 2

[keji masters]

these are my first cards i have finished and i hope to get the whole lot done and comments/rates are welcome

[keji masters]

cmon guys someone rate these cards plese

[Archangel of destiny]

good cards but slightly overpowered 7.77/10

[keji masters]

yeah these are only my first ones though which one do think is overpowerd?

[Archangel of destiny]

The effect of Sephirot is a little bit overpowered but this is my opinion you don't have to listen to me if you don't want to

please rate my apocalypse rider cards

[Viera~Fran]

The pictures look cool, but you could've worded them a little better. 8/10

[Cruxis89]

We'll for first cards they aren't too bad. I like cloud the best but he is slightly overpowered b/c he could potentially have 2400 ATK for no sacrifice. And even if he does switch to defense, it doesn't matter as much b/c his defense is pretty decent. Also OCG is bad. It took me a couple of time to understand what you were trying to say in terms of your "Great Battle". Not everything is suppossed to be lowercase especially the first word of your sentences, and specific names of cards. ex. ...when "Cloud" is face up on the field... But all in all they aren't that bad for first cards anyway. Fix your grammar weaken "Cloud" just a tiny bit even like 100 ATK less so it can be like Goblin Attack force, but even they have a lower defense. Idk not that shabby, I say 6/10 from me. Still need a little more work and clearer explanations on that one card.

[keji masters]

ok here is the cards redone and thanks for the correction and english is my first lanauge too.

[keji masters]

cmon plese rate fix these cards

[E.X.S.O.S.]

Hmm.......I think the grammar needs a little work.....and Seporith effect's a tad bit over-powered......lol Cloud is so weak compared to Sepi.^.^

But I think it's pretty good! And for a beginner like me! ((Especially the "Great Battle" one))

1st Card:7/10

2nd:9.5/10

3rd:6.5/10((Only because I like Cloud more, lol :P ))

[doji33]

why is everybody so nice? I give 4/10

[keji masters]

ah well you win some you lose some thanks for the comments here is some more and yeah cloud is a bit weak but the effect of great battle means that when cloud changes sides cloud becomes immune to being destoryed.

[Archangel of destiny]

nice cards balanced 8/10

[keji masters]

thank you thank you i am working on soras master anti and final forms at the moment and i am thinking about doing roxas and organisation as well

[littlem101]

The last cards you posted were way better then the first group. for the first group 5.75/10. The second group gets 8/10

[jinz]

Nice cards mate.

[SupaGreenMushroom]

44.44/50

good cards

[keji masters]

thank you guys here is some more cards i am now doing the organization cards i am basing all the card from they fight in the game

[KrakenNLD]

Hmmm, I always prefer more if people just simply post their card in ['img'] tag instead of an attachment. Since then you can watch them directly instead of clicking.

 

Anyhow, here we go...

 

Cloud

Too overpowered, 1900 ATK + 1700 DEF + LVL 4. Also the possibillity it gains 500 extra? WAY too strong. Or make the DEF something like 100 or something.

*Redone version*

Same thing, too high stats for a LVL4 monster. Make it a LVL5 for instance, then it's more balanced.

 

Great Battle

COULD become interesting. But first, work on that grammar, I needed to read that effect 2 times. But it really makes the duel a battle between cloud vs sephiroth a bit. Like the picture though :).

 

Sephiroth

The third one needed in this set, was obviously Sephiroth... *takes a look* Yes, I was right :P. Still a bit of it between, but is interesting somewhat. It can basicly attack every monster on the field of your opponent. But not more times (so direct attacking is not possible with Sephiroth). Although the attack is a bit too much. It can even make a Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon a hard time.

*redone version*

Much better, still TOO strong, but indeed much better (same reason.. too much ATK)

 

Riku

You pretty much need to think of stats of strenght. How strong a LVL 4 card can be. This one is more a LVL5 or LVL6 monster thanks to his effect.

 

Drive

Basicly another Fusion-Card for KH theme.

 

Donald

This one is better I think. No comment...

 

Sora

Now THAT I find balanced, not a too high ATK but also a fun effect. I would even put it in my deck just for the reason a lot of people want to make their monster enormously high. This one counters it almost perfectly.

 

Goofy

My favourite of the Disney-cartoons is Goofy :).

A bit TOO strong again... too high ATK. I would suggest making it a bit low, such as 1000. It's the effect that protects him... of some sort.

 

Sora - Valor Form

A bit too small... I hate it that small. Still, that one is really interesting, that it returns to the fusion deck after one turn. And it can do a lot of damage when it's out (but it's out for a short period of time). Reasonable.

 

*is getting tired now*

 

Sora - AntiForm

Like it, a bit... Same deal for Valor Form.

 

Sora - Master Form

Same deal, can deal much damage when it's out... a bit TOO much damage in his case[/b]

 

Sora - Final Form

Can't read it, don't wanna as well. If you can, please post the effect in text-format. For small text-cards, that is the best thing to do, I guess.

 

Sora - Wisdom Form

Strong Magic-returner *brings back some uber-magic cards which actually are only limited by 1 back in my hand*. You see my point.

 

 

Final

Art: 4/10

Sorry, white background with some = bad. Even though my deity-monsters are in that way the same. But it just doesn't look good. Other ones (the fusions) have text in their picture, what is also I don't like that much. But heck, art comes when the effect owns :).

 

Balance: 5/10

Some are balanced, others are WAAAAAAAAY to strong (the most) and some are weak. So eh, get some LVL4 cards and see their effects. And don't try to go over them, if a card seems to be too strong for his level, just increase that card his level with 1 until it is suitable.

 

Unique: 7/10

I have to admit, some are unique, if you have Sora on the field you can practicly do everything with his fusions. So I like it a bit... the idea is there...

 

Total: 5/10

Sorry, I am kinda hard, but they are waay too overpowered that I don't find them realistic. I know I am not a big YGO-card-fan... but at least my opinion is don't make lvl4 TOO good.

 

"Dragon Lord" also has a low attack and a moderate effect, but him + Flute of Summoning Dragon = god!

[keji masters]

Sora+Donald+Goofy this card can not be summoned execpt with the above monsters. When you try to summon this card toss a coin three times and call if you call right two times summon this card if you call it wrong two times summon Sora Ati form when this card battles with a monster destory that monster at the end of the damage step. When this monster is destoryed by battle summon Goofy, Donald and Sora from your deck. This card can only be equiped with up two equip spells.

there is soras final form effect thanks for the comments kraken

 

just a couple of things

 

1. yeah i will see if i can change the effects and stats for some monsters

 

2. seporith i think he is ok cus he cannot be summoned exept by geat battle

 

3. i think cloud is ok to cus he is going to switch sides when great battle is played

 

4. the fusions stay on the field until they are destoryed (see sora final)

 

5.again sorry about the art it is best i could find on google

 

6. i am doing other cards like the organization cards to couter these to make the whole thing a balanced set. thats all

 

*now i need to rest my fingers*

[keji masters]

come on guys someone rate my cards

[keji masters]

plese

[Bloodrun]

lol there good cards, they could use a little revam,p in the pics thought 8/10 =)

[keji masters]

thank you i am working on the organization cards now should have them up soon

[keji masters]

bump