Anarchy805 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 EffectThis card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 Fiend-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Fiend-Type monster to have this card gain its ATK until your opponents next End Phase. ------Third edit. hope the balance works.the picture was going to be a Warrior-Type but he looked a bit evil so I thought fiend would be OK. I shall fire up Photoshop and work on some better pictures. I don't get much time for graphics and my £D Studio instillation is corrupt so that slows production down. I might have to start working in Blender 3D again for a while until i find my 3DS discs.::: OK I put a different picture on this one now. ::: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 neat effect and picture, though I think its atk is far too low 1900 is considered low even for lv5, much less lv7 I'd raise the atk up to 2300ish or something 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 OCG fixsFiend-typeand End Phase and whut Ragnarok said too... i give 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 thanks ppl. i made it a low attack to try not make it OP. i have a few fiends that can up this ones ATK by about 4000 so i tried to keep the ATK low. but if you think it should be ok at 2300 then i shall change it. thanks again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 The stats are perfect, I just don't think the picture looks a Fiend :?. I like a lot the effect, simple and pretty useful. Here is the correct OCG: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by discarding 2 Fiend-Type monsters. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 Fiend-Type monster to have this card gain its ATK until your opponents next end phase. Not bad OCG I must say, pretty good for a Level 2 member. Little errors like: Monster = monster (Only captalize monster in Monster Card, but we don't use Monster Card on the new OCG)Fiend Type = Fiend-TypeAfter sentences that starts with "Once" you must use a comma (Like on my correction).can not = cannot As I said, litte OCG errors. Rate - 9.2/10 (Good job ;)) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Mousy Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Zeaux... End Phase needs to be capitalized too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Zeaux... End Phase needs to be capitalized too.You beat me >=(I guess the card is good for a Level 2 member, not a bad balance unlike other newbies (no offense). 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 great card OCG has been fixed by the people above. great card. ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeaux Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Zeaux... End Phase needs to be capitalized too. I was typing too fast :D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Good card and OCG errors are few. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeriesUmbra Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 1 pic is of a warrior not a fiend 2 effect cool 3 ATK would be low but considering it's effect the ATK is perfect. 8/10 and a 9/10 once you get the pic sorted. This would be brilliant for Revial. Not bad for someone who's been on here for about a year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anarchy805 Posted August 3, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 OK I think this should be OK for a fiend picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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