I need help with this one...

[Thewho]

Well, this is my first attempt of seriously making a card. this was a card that was created last year, but never finished, so I'm posting it now. I didn't want to get too crazy, so the effect isn't that creative. Any comments and suggestions are greatly appriciated!

 

I need something a bit more creative with the effect

and a better name.

 

Effect:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by removing from play 5 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, you may remove one card on your opponent's side of the field. during the turn you activated this effect, this card cannot attack.

[ragnarok1945]

with that high of a cost to summon it and no boosting effect, I'd say 2500 atk is far too low

 

effect is UPed, I'd say once per turn destroy ALL of your opponent's face down spells/traps, then raise the atk up to 3500 or something

 

7/10

[☆ Master Sami ☆]

Great Pic, but Zoloroc The King Of The Dragons would suite it better. OCG looks solid

 

8.5/10

[Thewho]

"Wandering the forum, he bumps into this thread..."

 

anybody else wanna help?

[Milk-Chan]

Everything is fine, however, at the cost it takes, I would amp the attack up to at least 3000. Otherwise, its a solid card.

8/10

[Thewho]

Everything is fine' date=' however, at the cost it takes, I would amp the attack up to at least 3000. Otherwise, its a solid card.

8/10

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thanks :)