Fairo Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 [align=center]these are my cards, and don't forget to reply and rate my thread : Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
al9090 Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Gimin warrior is not a type if you r in mexico demon is ocg needs work and punuation 6.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 OCG errors (here is 1 fixed)The beast Each time this card inflicts battle damage to your opponent, he/she must discard 1 card to the Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fairo Posted July 28, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 Gimin warrior is not a type if you r in mexico demon is ocg needs work and punuation 6.2/10 Yes, but if it was, i won't get any points for creativity ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 you spelled warrior wrong to...and u have may OCG errors as i can tell6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 28, 2009 Report Share Posted July 28, 2009 opponents hand is shuffled? (treat is spelled wrong) u wrote treate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 demon is not a real type OCG needs a little work, and the effects are quite simple, but they work 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
asterr259 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Errors- Obvious misspells, demon is not a type, use Fiend instead, not sure but I think u meant [Warrior/Gemini] maybe? oh and warrior has 3 "R"s......and y would ur opponent shuffle his hand again? Other errors above.....you spelled warrior wrong too...and u have many OCG errors as i can tell6/10 well.....u have misspells too XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.GhostRyder Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 I like your idea once again. Capitilize your effect beginings and check all spellings before you post the card. And Spirit type is under the effect dropdown menue on the card maker. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 cards are ok. no fake types. effects are meh. pics aren't really good. ~5/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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