Godot Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 [align=center]Welcome to my new Fan-Fic and my First Sonic One. There will be Action! Fan-Made Characters! Comic Characters! And Romance! (*Cough--Maybe--Cough*) So Sit Back Relax and Read Sonic The Hedgehog! Aura of Dimensions! [spoiler=Characters]Welcome to The --Gun Heroes Computer-- I Will List the Heroes for my Commander. They Will Be Introduced as I go along. I'll Start out with the Really Important Characters. Sonic The HedgehogAge:16Color:BlueDescription: Green Eyes, Red and White Shoes. Male. Can Run Really Fast and has an Array of Abilitys.Deeds: Has Saved World Countless Times. D3M7nt0n REFTAUS FELINEX.Age:--?Color:CLASSIFIED PASSCODE NEEDED.Description:CLASSIFIEDDeeds: UNKOWN [spoiler=Chapters/Notices] NOTICE #1: Prolouge is Short because it's a Prolouge, So I apologize for the Short Prolouge. In the Future they will be bigger. [spoiler=Prolouge]Dear Sonic The Hedgehog, You Have Been Chosen for an Important Mission for GUN. We Hope you can make it to The National GUN HQ in Station Square.Cheers,GUN Commander. The message rang in Sonic's mind. No explanation, just a short message asking him to come. What was the mission? Why do they need him? Was it a trap, or was Eggman up to something. These questions and more rang through Sonic's mind as he approached the building. "Okay, they wrote the passcode in the mail...9-4-7-1..."The doors slide open and Sonic wandered inside. The Interior was dull. And it looked deserted. There was no soul in sight as Sonic headed to the Commander's Office. "If I'm correct, the Commander said it was the passcode backwards...So it should be, 1-7-4-9."The door opened as Sonic entered, the Room. But there was a problem. "The Commander's not here!? Thats odd, he said he'd be here today...I wonder.."Just then Sonics gaze aimed at the Master Computer. On the top it said, WELCOME TO THE GUN HEROES COMPUTER. Sonic scanned the Nineteen Entries, He saw his name written as the 6th entry. "Hmm, Tails and Knuckles are gonna be here too. Thats a relief. Hmm, whats this?"Sonic aimed at the mouse and scrolled down. "What? Who in Mobius is D3M7nt0n REFTAUS FELINEX?Just as Sonic finished his sentence the door opened and an alarm went off. Who Is D3M7nt0n REFTAUS FELINEX? Who, Or What.. entered the Commander's Room? Why is an Alarm Sounding? Find out in the Next Chapter of Sonic The Hedgehog --Aura Of Dimensions.-- [/align] [align=center][spoiler=How to Submit a Character.]Easy! Post Your Characters Name, Age, Bio, Gender and Ablities and I'll computerize it![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 WOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHWOAHSTUPID CHARACTER LIST! -.-SHORT CHAPTERS -.-'PARAGRAPHS ARE WAAAY TOO SHORT -.-" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Umm Lets See. It's A Prolouge. It's supposed to be like a Computer, that explains the character list.? You're supposed to Start a New Paragraph when there's Dialect. And Why Does Everything have to be in caps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Becuase.Well, that was then.Anyways, STUPID CHARACTER LIST IS STUPID Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Godot Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Sigh, Kay, I'll change it by tomorrow, I'm tired today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted August 3, 2009 Report Share Posted August 3, 2009 If I weren't so tired, I'd rip this apart like I usually do, but I think KaiKae-san already did that, so I'll just stick to the plot. I should warn you, though, that you need to be much more detailed in your descriptions. Sonic is surprisingly in-character. However, it seems odd that he'd so willingly follow the GUN like this when he's conflicted with them so many times. Maybe it's just my usual conception of him as a small-scale, non-evil Magnificent Bastard, but I can absolutely see Sonic taking command of the whole operation and perverting it iuri magno. Can't wait to see how you'll work in the others. Take my submissions only if Empress Blaze is in this story. The robot is all in Latin because I figure Blaze would like Latin. Seems to suit her personality to know dead languages OF SCIENCE.[spoiler=Submissions]CAF-CP/M27 (a.k.a: "Caf", "Burning Iron Body - First Body / Twenty-Seventh Attempt", "Corpus Ardens Ferreus - Corpus Primus / Molimen Septimus Et Vicensimus")Age: 1Color: RedDescription: A robotic being created by Blaze after the events of the Rush series. Deeds: None yet. However, considering its purpose, it is indubitably capable of great things. VentusAge: 1, roughly Feather the JaguarAge: 18Color: Gold. Very shiny gold.Description: A psychokineser and one of Blaze's many bodyguards, he is a rather severe sufferer of the Bodyguard Crush. Though he means well and tries to help others, he can be very self-centered and arrogant at times, particularly when Blaze is involved.He was named because he levitated so high at birth, and his powers of levitation for himself and others are extreme. Even without his psychic powers, he is an agile, if weak, fighter.Deeds: The first of Blaze's bodyguards to follow her effectively enough to join her in another world.[spoiler=USAGE NOTES: Exactly what this guy is meant to be later on]A villain. A very villainous villain. Basically, he starts out pretty nice, but as soon as Blaze starts falling for — or even befriending — *anyone*, he Jumps Off the Slippery Slope and turns into a Complete Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaisu Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 Huh.Sorry to be off-topic but GameMaster, remember Weather Report's PM? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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