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ok OCG errors

 

spell = Spell

trap = Trap

captialize 1st word of each sentence

sumond= summoned

grave yard = Graveyard

ca = can

 

OCG fixing for Stealth Striker

If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a Spell or Trap card this card can attack you opponent's Life Pionts directly.

 

OCG fix for The Sumoning(Summoning)

Pay 1000 to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand.

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Let see......the correction:

Stealth Striker (cap the first letter of each word.)

1st Addition SPE-001

Warrior

If this card is Summoned by the effect of a Spell/Trap card, then this card can attack your opponent's Life Point directly.

 

The Summoning

Pay 1000 Life Points to summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand or deck. (I may have change it.)

 

Turning the Tides

When this card is equipped to a monster, switch the original ATK/DEF of the equipped monster.

 

hope these help

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what ev


oh yeah what about big shield gardna


oh yeah what about big shield gardna

big shield gardna has a heavy price for his Def' date=' these cards are mehish, fix the OCG plz. 6.5/10

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big shield gardna only have 100 ATK and switchs to ATK after it is attacked once

exactly........

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By the standpoint of trying to get at what you're trying to show, yeah they would work really well together. However, analytically, these aren't aweful, but they're not great. Yeah you cap the first letter in every part of a card name, unless if it's something minor like "of" or "the." Also, you mispelled edition...wow. All of their pics are bad, since Stealth Striker's is from Assassin's Creed, and the other two just really don't work. For a lv.4 monster, Stealth Striker either needs lower def or atk, or raise it's level to 5 or 6. Plus, if he's supposed to be like a ninja or assassin, he should, logically, have a higher atk than def. Now for the OCG fixes:

 

~"Stealth Striker:"

If this card is Special Summoned by the effect of a Spell or Trap card this card can attack your opponent directly during the turn this card is Special Summoned.

 

~"The Summoning:"

By paying 1000 Life Points you can Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower monster from your hand.

 

~"Turn the Tides:"

Switch the ATK and DEF of the equipped card. If the equipped card would be destroyed by a Spell, Trap, or Monster effect destroy this card instead.

 

These cards do have potential, but right now they aren't the best cards I've seen.

 

6.5/10

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you can add in the corrections and post them on this same page jtop

 

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what ev

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oh yeah what about big shield gardna

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oh yeah what about big shield gardna

 

that one switches to attack position once attacked, remember?

 

I thought that was the Little Shield Gardna.

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