Exiro Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 Hello! This is my first card not based on a story. Since it is my first realistic card, it wouldn't surprise me if the reaction are like "Overpowered". I would be happy to have comment's at first place!This monster's ATK increases by 500 everytime a Dragon on your side of the field is destroyed.If this monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of remaining monsters on your side of the field x 1000.While this monster is in attack mode, by offering all monsters on your side of the field except this one, increase the ATK of this monster by 300 points for every offered monster. Place this monster in defense-mode during the End Phase of the turn that you activated this effect. Its position cannot be changed as long as it remains face-up on the field. Please do Comment! ^^ Edit:After a while I changed this card. His power now grows by 300 each time and 1000 damage will stay. But thats not really much so I added another one in this new set "Phantasy Unleashed" so continue commenting ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 Hello! This is my first card not based on a story. Since it is my first realistic card' date=' it wouldn't surprise me if the reaction are like "Overpowered". I would be happy to have comment's at first place!This monster's ATK increases by 500 everytime a Dragon on your side of the field is destroyed.If this monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of remaining monsters on your side of the field x 1000. Please do Comment! ^^if you would lower the numbers a little like this:This monster's ATK increases by 300 everytime a Dragon type monster on your side of the field is destroyed and If this monster is destroyed, inflict damage to your opponent's LP equal to the number of remaining monsters on your side of the field x400please rate my "apocalypse raiders" cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
theallpowerfulme Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 I would be more specific than destroyed, say just "destroyed in battle", and 1000 per monster is quite heavy, so perhaps only 700 or so, tho id wait for more opinions on this b4 u change anything.Otherwise i think this card is superb (iv never been able 2 get that picture in a decent resolution) and its a great start to ur unthemed cards. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
flyingdagger8 Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 I've seen the image before and 1000 points is too much. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archangel of destiny Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 hey for a first time it's good so give him a little more credit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted November 13, 2007 Report Share Posted November 13, 2007 hey for a first time it's good so give him a little more credit that's basically what I was gonna say^^^:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted November 14, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 The idea is basically that he is a little weak for a level-eight, but that he won't be destroyed directly because of the direct damage effect. That is why I want to keep that number hight. Imagine you have 5 monsters on the field {which isn't even likely} and you offer two of them for Inaga. If the opponent has like 3 monsters, one of them will probably crushed directly by Inaga, leaving the opponent two more monsters.Now it's your opponent's turn, and say he can't summon. He goes to battle phase, and one of his monsters will crush an arbitrary monster of yours, what makes {in a dragon deck} Inaga grow to 2900/2700 {yes, I think I will change his grow power to 300} if he cruses Inaga now, it will hurt him 2000 and he beat a monster that can grow enormous. And in this example you are in a strong advantage since you start with 5 monsters and he with 3.I think it should be like this. Either he has a strong monster that can crush him easy, killing the other monsters first since Inaga is no problem for him, or he has to take big damage, which isn't even that big as you have seen. Thx for the ratings!btw, I found this picture with 2 simple words that are in this card's name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yaden Yuki Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 since you are new i am giving you 9/10 you would get an 7 because of the big numbers and the pic that is used much times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lilrow Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 I think the damage should stay as it is. It wold give dragons a big boost. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Boss Z Posted November 14, 2007 Report Share Posted November 14, 2007 i'd give it a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
randomnessmaster Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 God Kaze's Joke:"How many Saiyans does it take to screw in a lightbulb? One, but it takes him 10 episodes to do it!"lol thats funny tell em i said so if ur his friend kuz frankly im too lazy to tell him my self T___O___T anyway its a good card exiro but i do agree that it needs a lil less on the damage to the opponent thing :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Viera~Fran Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 I agree with them. Good picture and everything, but it should do like 500 damage instead of 1000. Good realistic card though 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The inventor Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yokofox88 Posted November 15, 2007 Report Share Posted November 15, 2007 the thing is that dragon wont get his effect if you mirror force him. the 1000 is a bit much yes, but honestly it doesn't seem to me like the biggest deal in the world if you pluck off all his monsters before destroying him. to top it all off at the very most he could have five monsters on the field then tribute two of them to bring him out that leaves you with him and 3 other monsters, thats like a 3k hit. so all in all i don't find this to be a god card like many of these other people are making it out to be. i give it an 8/10 for being a tad bit veg on parts of the effect. (do you gain the effects do to battle, effects or what????) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slam Fist Posted November 30, 2007 Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 hahahan that a monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted November 30, 2007 Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 don't post cards on other peoples threads. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaca Posted November 30, 2007 Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 7/10 for the cards that Exiro made and -200/10 for Slam Fist because he posted on Exiro's thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heavyd91 Posted November 30, 2007 Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 These are some awesome cards, but a thousand points per monster is a bit much........maybe 600 points per monster? otherwise good job. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted November 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2007 God Kaze's Joke:"How many Saiyans does it take to screw in a lightbulb? One' date=' but it takes him 10 episodes to do it!"lol thats funny tell em i said so if ur his friend kuz frankly im too lazy to tell him my self T___O___T anyway its a good card exiro but i do agree that it needs a lil less on the damage to the opponent thing :P[/quote']Yeah I read it too lol. There should also be a video-remix about this:"How many Saiyans does it take to screw in a lightbulb? It's over 9000!"If you don't get it... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted December 1, 2007 Report Share Posted December 1, 2007 Cool! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pupil Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 G00d cards a bit overpowerd but sick 99.9999999999999999999999/100 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parallel Gunshot Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 hahahan that a monster. corniest card spam ever @ Exiro = the cards are good for a first try there awesome... but as has been said many a time; over-used images.7.4/10 (would be more like 9 but images = GAH!) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exiro Posted May 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 Thanks for the comments :) I also noticed how weird it looks when my sig has the same card as one of the cards in this thread, so I have turned my sig off in the first post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted May 27, 2008 Report Share Posted May 27, 2008 the dragon is alright and creative, good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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