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[DQ8] 1vs1 [DQ8]

As usual It's a normal 1vs1, but there will be no votes, only 3 Judges who will decide who will win. ( Winner is determined by the decision of 2 judges

 

rules are:

- Make a Level 12 "GOD" monster

- First to post a card will be my opponent

- Loser gives winner 3 REPS

- Winner must give 1 REP for each Judge

- Judge must be a 5+ stars member, and not any 5+ stars. He must know perfect OCG.

- members are more than welcomed to comment on the cards, giving their ratings, expecting who will win, .. etc

 

Judge must judge the cards this way:

- Pic 5/50

- name 5/50

- OCG 20/50

- Effect 10/50

- Personal opinion 10/50

 

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This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned, remove from play all other cards on the field and in both players hands. Then, both players Special Summon monsters from their Deck until they have 5 monsters on their field, and select 5 Spell or Trap Cards from their Deck and Set them. This card is unaffected by card effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card during each of your Standby Phases. The ATK and DEF of this card are each equal to the number of Chaos Counters on it x1000. If this card has 10 Chaos Counters on it, remove it from play and both players unite their hand with their Deck and shuffle it.[/align]

 

.:: Waiting for judges ::.

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I will challenge you :D.

 

Wait a minute and I will post the card.

 

EDIT:

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 6 cards you control to the Graveyard and removing all cards in your Graveyard from play. As long this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of Trap Cards your opponent controls. When your opponent activate a Spell Card this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase. When this card attacks, select 1 monster on your opponent's Deck and Special Summon it. This card loses ATK and DEF equal to the Level of the Special Summoned monster x 300. Switch control of the Special Summoned monster to your opponent during the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is selected as a target by the effect of a monster your opponent controls, your can have this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF to negate and destroy it.

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Yes I can see the OCG errors mainly in Zeaux's card. Let me point them out for you. (I made OCG errors because I haven't concentrated on my card making enough, now I look at my OCG thoroughly. And not just think I had perfect OCG with just one check. I promise my OCG will now be much better and be near perfect).

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot only be Special Summoned except by sending 6 cards you control to the Graveyard and removing all cards in your Graveyard from play. As long this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of Trap Cards your opponent controls. When your opponent activates a Spell Card, this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase. When this card attacks, select 1 monster in your opponent's Deck and Special Summon it. This card loses ATK and DEF equal to the Level of the Special Summoned monster x 300. Switch control of the Special Summoned monster to your opponent during the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is selected as a target by the effect of a monster your opponent controls, your can have this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF to negate and destroy it.

 

Decrease can be used to replace "lose" like this: . I used to use "can only", but now I think that it's OCG errors. Cannot be blah blah blah Summoned except by blah blah is probably the correct OCG.

For Omega Devil. I'm suprised to see your OCG perfect even though it looks like some of the words require re-wording. This bit I'm not sure about:

 

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned, remove from play all other cards on the field and in both players hands. Then, both players Special Summon monsters from their Deck until they have 5 monsters on their field, and select 5 Spell or Trap Cards from their Deck and Set them. This card is unaffected by card effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card during each of your Standby Phases. The ATK and DEF of this card are each equal to the number of Chaos Counters on it x1000. If this card has 10 Chaos Counters on it, remove it from play and both players unite their hand with their Deck and shuffle it.

 

Bolded part.

Is it for both of them? Because I think it should be "both players each control 5 monsters". Sorry for the slight change. I'm just not sure about that.

 

Now, onto the cards: Zeaux's card is good. But the name isn't good enough, ruler of the world is not quite a good name. Omega's card is beautiful. It's worthy of winning this contest:

 

Rate for both:

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Zeaux's card

Picture: 49/50

Name: 38/50

OCG: 41/50

Effect: 44/50

Personal Opinion: Great pic. Not an interesting name. OCG errors have been stated above, you have possibly made the effect in a rush and you possibly haven't checked your OCG properly. It can lose a lot of ATK and DEF, normally, monsters have both their ATK and DEF equal to 4000, even though this card has 5000 ATK and 4000 DEF, both could be under 4000. But the balance is good, I understand that it's DEF could go into the 3000's but has high ATK that is a bit over 4000. And the effect is a bit good as well, so 43/50

 

:: -OmeGa DeviL- :: -'s card

Picture: 50/50 simply epic

Name: 49/50 epic as well

OCG: 49/50 just not sure on the thingy I bolded. Just look above.

Effect: 48/50 It's very unique

Personal Opinion: Epic card. Simple epic, I understand the effect and it was superior. It was an excellent card, 49/50. One of the best cards I have seen for this week.

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My vote goes to Omega!

Forgive me if you found a lot more OCG errors in Zeaux's card than I do. Not everybody has perfect OCG.

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You are worng Devastator

 

blah, blah, blah you can only is correct too, both are corrects.

 

Also, you made a mistake when you was correcting Omega Devil's OCG

 

they have 5 monsters on their field = they control 5 monsters

 

Oh well, is your way to vote so I will not judge you.

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You are worng Devastator

 

blah' date=' blah, blah you can only is correct too, both are corrects.

 

Also, you made a mistake when you was correcting Omega Devil's OCG

 

they have 5 monsters on their field = they control 5 monsters

 

Oh well, is your way to vote so I will not judge you.

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Don't clarify it that way. Also, the first one. I prefer that one than your one, that's why I just fixed it like that. And the 2nd one wasn't a mistake, I wasn't sure because I thought it was for both. It would only be that if it was 5 monsters on the field.

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Well your OCG correction was wrong at some points,

but I guess i can't ignore your judging, you were very speciefic

 

accepted, Thanx :)

you will recieve your rep when the contest is over and the winner is declared.

 

Waiting for the next 2 Judges.

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Well your OCG correction was wrong at some points' date='

but I guess i can't ignore your judging, you were very speciefic

 

accepted, Thanx :)

you will recieve your rep when the contest is over and the winner is declared.

 

Waiting for the next 2 Judges.

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Like I said. Not everyone has perfect OCG :D

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Key:

 

Bold/Crossed out = Corrections

 

Italic = Unsure

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Devil:

 

Pic (4/5): Looks like a whole bunch of life forms fused together. Meh... it's fine, but I'm not too much of a fan of it.

 

Name (5/5): It fits.

 

OCG (14.5/20): This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set, except by Tributing 3 DARK Fairy-Type monsters you control. When this card is Summoned, remove from play all other cards on the field and in both players' hands. Both players must Special Summon monsters from their respective Decks until they control 5 monsters on their field, and. Then, both players must select 5 Spell or Trap Cards from their Deck and Set them. This card is unaffected by card effects. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. Place 1 Chaos Counter on this card during each of your Standby Phases (max. 10). The ATK and DEF of this card are each equal to the number of Chaos Counters on it x 1000. If this card has 10 Chaos Counters on it, remove it from play. and Both players must return all cards in their hands to their respective Decks. Both Decks are then shuffled.

 

Effect (8.5/10): It's "godly" up until the last sentence. Looking at "Extinction" in it's name, I was hoping to see cards being sent to the graveyard, or being removed from play, instead of being returned to the deck. But, it'd be more balanced the way it is now.

 

Personal Opinion (7.5/10): The above ratings pretty much sum up how I feel about this card.

 

Total: 39.5/50

 

 

 

Zeaux:

 

Pic (5/5): It fits.

 

Name (3.5/5): "Ruler of Worlds" sounds better. The name, overall, is kinda unoriginal, though.

 

OCG (16/20): This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 6 cards you control to the Graveyard and removing from play all cards in your Graveyard from play. As long this card remains face-up on the field, negate the effects of Trap Cards your opponent controls. When your opponent activates a Spell Card, this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF until the End Phase. When this card attacks, select 1 monster in your opponent's Deck and Special Summon it. This card loses ATK and DEF equal to the Level of the Special Summoned monster x 300. Switch control of the Special Summoned monster to your opponent during the end of the Battle Phase. When this card is selected as a targeted by the effect of a Monster Card your opponent controls, your can have this card loses 1000 ATK and DEF to negate it's effect and destroy it.

 

Effect (7/10): Difficult Summoning condition + Major Power loss = Underpowered.

The only useful thing is that you get to use one of your opponent's monsters. (Only for 1 turn though.)

 

Personal Opinion (7.5/10): Your above ratings summed up my opinion, not to mention I recall seeing this card a couple of times before... but I won't count that.

 

Total: 39/50

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Omega Devil gets it by 1/2 a point.

 

Both of you can do a lot better than this, though. :|

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I think your correction was wrong at some points. "Then" is needed at some parts of the effect, "and" also. I looked up for some cards with similar effects (abit) to make sure to write those "then" and "and" ^_^

But yeah I know I was wrong at the other parts you mentioned "respective, Drecks, they control, ..."

 

Thanx for your judging buddy, contest is now over

your rep will come soon,

 

thanx for the challange Zeaux. ^)_^

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