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Burstfire. SW.


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-Random fragment on the left is bad

-BG doesn't really go good with the colors and kills compo a bit

-Random pencil/dots kills some of the c4ds and other parts, specially on the orb.

-Placement of Focal with the BG looks like he is floating in the air.

-The colors are gross!!!!!!!!!!

-Lighting is done wrong on v2, Lighting is needed in EVERY tag just about.

 

Theres more but start there

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