Forgetful Angel Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster and removing from play 2 cards in your Graveyard. There can only be 1 face-up "Divine One- Whisperer of Life" on the field. You gain 200 LP everytime a monster is Summoned. When a monster is destroyed you lose 200 LP. You can pay 1000 LP to Special Summon 1 level 4 or lower LIGHT monster from your Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 great card. it is great in evry way ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
War Kittens Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 I like it. You have a couple grammatical and OCG errors, but otherwise I think its a great card. I'd use it in a duel if it were real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Good cards some grammar errors but nothing bigbut you left off the E on Face-Downand Tou = You 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster and removing from play 2 cards in your Graveyard from play either take "from play" out before the 2 or take it out after Graveyard... cuz see.. it don't make since it should be eitherThis card can not be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster and removing 2 cards in your Graveyard from play or This card can not be Normal Summoned or Set, this card can only be Special Summoned by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster and removing from play 2 cards in your Graveyard. see? other wise it's good i give a 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
froggiewyatt Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 good card some OCG errors fac-up= face-up tou=you otherwise good card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Thank you everyone, I think I got them fixed. I guess it was easy to tell this card was a little rushed. More rating pretty please. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 impressive effect, pic is beautiful, and OCG is solid 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forgetful Angel Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Milk-Chan Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I like this! It's a pretty solid card overall. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Some OCG errors and the odd spelling, good pics: Use this to help you, its only the basics. Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ theirmay = canface up = face-up attribute = Attributetype = Typeritual = Ritualmonster card zone = Monster Card Zone *List edited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Good card, the image looks great, the OCG is fine, and the effect is interesting and balanced. Not too much wrong with this card. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Great card, pic is nice and balanced effect, OCG seems good to me. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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