hyaku_hachi Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Hope you like it! Decided to give it a little shine. Lore: When this card is targeted for an attack, remove it from play. During the turn this effect is activated, reduce the Battle Damage you would take from one attack to 0. If this card was removed from play by it's own effect, return this card to your field during your next Standby Phase. Edit: Fixed the OCG again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ATG3192 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 WOW!!! This is probably the best "first card" I've ever seen so far! I mean teh only errors I can find are that there should be a space between the first and second sentences; looks like you missed the space key. lol. And the only other mistake I can find is that standby phase needs to be capped. Other then that...DAMN!!! I like it. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 i think stanby phase should be be captialized but good OCG though good pic this is a very good 1st card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 OCG is excellent. Effects awesome for a first try 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Put a space between periods and a new sentence, gr8 card for first try. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted July 29, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Card is now fixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 29, 2009 Report Share Posted July 29, 2009 Good card, but I sense double accounting, anyone else? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Great card for a Newb dude. You should join the club in the spoiler in my sig. Good card' date=' but I sense double accounting, anyone else?[/quote'] GTFO bit**. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 signed up for your club Lrovani Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.:JBM:. Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 signed up for your club Lrovani k, awesome, check for updates. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 effect is quite balanced for a 1st card. OCG is only slightly off, so this gets a 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 19, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 This card is pretty good. OCG is only slightly off so 9.8/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Impact Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 It really is hard to belive that ur new but ill trust uHint the way he types titleAlmost perfect OCG except fro wording errorsand custom avi....BUT ILL TRUST YOUAnyway good card. Dont use googleuse sights like deviant art, photobucket, or the showcase section....but u already kno that dont you......:) jk Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Actually I've seen new people make cards and people commenting that they're OCG is off so I decided to make the OCG as perfect as I could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 at the last effect should be (i think): If this card was removed from play by it's own effect, return this card to your hand during your next Standby Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 20, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Thank you for that OCG fix, except it goes back to the field not hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 More comments pls. :)Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 If im not mistaken the effect should read "When this card is targeted for attack" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toot Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 kewl8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 @Cindy, although yours is also correct I have seen my text on a couple of other cards so i think either is fine. (Then again I'm bad at OCG so this may not be true.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
:^) Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 It was probably like that on old OCG cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Alright thanks again Cindy, I have updated the card with your OCG fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 BUMP... again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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