marveldude16 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I mean editing the cards to make them more fair and improving the OCG because I'm useless with that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Can't see first card, some cards are dubled. You can edit your post with the "EDIT" button on the right-bottom corner of your post. Post lores(effects) under cards or in spoilers, so it will be easier to edit them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yangninja Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 2-3 of these cards shouldn't be on this thread. They should be under pop culture-Mysterio-Avatar-The sentry (I think) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I realise some of them should be under pop culture, but I want to make them ALL more realistic so I posted them in the forum that said REALISTIC. If you wouldn't mind helping rather than nitpicking like people have the last three times I've had to post this, that would be great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 When I read the thread subject I wanted to help u with ur OCG but then I saw a whole set which gonna take 4ever to fix so bear with me. And watch ur language speaking to Yangninja. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 ^This^ I was going to help, until noticed your attitude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 ^^ above ilikesharks2020 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 half the pics are unimpressive, along with the OCG errors and bland effects 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 fail no vannillas pics suck 3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 This forum is useless. My attitude was because I have posted this same thread three times being told to move and change it everytime, I just want some help, not to be told exactly how this thread should be done. and as for Ragnorok, I wasn't asking for ratings, I was asking for help improving them. Of course there are OCG errors, I have no idea how to do it properly, thats why I am asking for people to help do it. There is nothing wrong with the pictures or the effects. They do exactly what I want them to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I decided to help. [spoiler=Help]Most of the pics are very bad, the effects are very dull, and bland. OCG is horrbile. No vanillas. They are OP'd. Most of them belong in the Pop Culture Section. 1.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 funk you allAnd I think that right there should end my little experiment. I apologise to everyone I was rude to and to anyone who took offense to my comments. I thought I'd test a theory which proved completely wrong. Usually people who are bad get everything, money, woman, fast cars etc etc, so I wanted to see how willing people would be to help someone like that. I think I got a little too into it in the end though :(. And there you go folks, it pays to be good XD. The thread still stands though, anyone who is willing to help improve the cards, it would be much appreciated, especially as how I just spoke to everyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 As I said eariler Post lores(effects) under cards or in spoilers' date=' so it will be easier to edit them.[/quote'] People don't have time to rewtirte effects from nothing. With this the can edit parts that are wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I think that is a lie. (Your "experiment"). Anyway, I exept your apolige. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Yeah, your right about me lying, no point denying it. Yesterday was a really off day for me and I was in a real bad mood, then made up some crap to get myself out of it. But I do apologise to everyone, I was out of line and no-one deserved it.. Bullseye- Inflict 1000 points of damage to both you and your opponents life points and destroy one card on the field. . Arrow Of Forgiving- When an opponent attacks and there is a ‘Penance Of The King’ on the field the attack is negated and damage equal to that of Penance Of The King attack points is dealt to opponent’s life points. . H.A.M.M.E.R- When this card is normal summoned or set, player may summon up to two other H.A.M.M.E.Rs they may have. At the cost of 700 life points, once per turn, as long as there are three H.A.M.M.E.Rs on the field, player may attack opponent’s life points directly with any monster on the field. . House Of Mirrors- When an opponent calls an attack flip three coins. If you get three heads, negate the attack and inflict the damage to the opponent’s life points. If two heads, inflict damage equal to half attacking monsters attack points to opponent’s life points. If one head, negate the attack and inflict damage equal to half attacking monsters attack points to your life points. If no heads, the attack continues as normal. . Illusion Castle- As long as any field card is in play, the controller of this card may special summon any Dark or Earth monsters from their hand without paying tribute. . Penance King- This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card can only be special summoned by sending one Soldier of Penance and one Penance of the King from the field to the graveyard. This card can be treated as Penance Of The King for the effects of magic and trap cards. As long as this card remains face up on the field, all warrior type monsters on controller’s side receive a 700-point attack boost. This card cannot attack life points directly. . Penance Of The King- This card cannot be special summoned. This card can only be special summoned by removing one magic, trap and monster card from play (player may look through their deck to do this). Each turn, the owner of this card may pay life points in multiples of 500 to increase the attack of this card by the number paid. When this card attacks, the owner of this card must discard one monster card from their hand and then flips a coin. I f heads, the card is special summoned during the next standby phase. If tail the card is removed from play. . S.H.E.I.L.D- As long as three H.A.M.M.E.R remain on the field, all battle damage to life points of card controller is negated. When there are no longer three H.A.M.M.E.R on the field, this card is destroyed. . S.W.O.R.D- As long as three H.A.M.M.E.R remain on the field, damage equal to half the damage done to the controllers life points by opponent, is inflicted on the opponent. When there are no longer three H.A.M.M.E.R on the field, this card is destroyed. . Safety Harness- By equipping this card to ‘Penance Of The King’, Penance Of The King automatically gets an attack equal to that of the remaining life points of the owner. Every time the life points go down, so doe ‘The Penance Of The King’s attack. When ‘The Penance Of The King’ is destroyed while equipped with this card, life points go to 0. . Soldier Of Penance- This card receives a boost to defence for every ‘Penance Of The King’ on the field. This card cannot be designated as a target by any spell, trap or monster card effects or attacks as long as ‘Penance Of The King’ remains on the field. The Kings Cavalry- This card takes up three monster slots, but may attack three times. If this card is tributed, it only counts as one unless it is to summon a card with ‘Penance’ in its name. If any of ‘The Kings Cavalry’ is destroyed, this card is destroyed. Instead of going to the graveyard when destroyed, this card is removed from play. As long as a ‘Penance King’ remains face up on the field, this card may attack life points directly. . Thunderbolts- Negate the activation of an opponents spell or trap card and look at it. Choose one of the following options.1. Use the card for yourself2. Send the card to the graveyard.If you choose option two and send the card to the graveyard, you may use this card as Rageki by discarding one card from your hand. . Universal Diversion- All spellcasters receive an increase of 500 attack and defence points. As long as Chaos Sorcerer remains face up on the field, life point damage to this cards controller becomes zero and the attacking monsters attack points are reduced by half. . Venom- This card may be equipped to any opponent controlled monster. A monster equipped with this card will be destroyed after three turns. Any damage to the owner of the monster equipped with this card is negated. This card is destroyed along with the monster it is equipped to. The owner may pay 300 life points to return it to the top of their deck instead of it being destroyed. The deck is then shuffled. . D. Hero Musicman- D. Hero Guitarman + D. Hero Songcaster. Select one spell or trap card on opponent’s side of the field. 1. Destroy it 2. Use it for yourself D. Hero Guitarman- Every monster on controllers side of the field receive an increase of 900 points to both attack and defence (excluding this card) as long as this card is face up on the field. This card can only attack if there are no other monsters on controller side of the field with a lower level. . Impossible Cannon- Inflict 300 points of damage for every card with ‘Penance’ in its name on the field or in the graveyard. If there are none, flip a coin. I heads, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent, if tails inflict 1500 points of damage to yourself. . Mysterio- This card can only be summoned with the ritual card ‘The Madness Of Mysterio’ and by paying a tribute equal to eight stars. As long as this card remains face up on the field, all machine type monsters receive a boost of 500 points to both attack and defence. Every time your opponent attacks they must flip a coin and call it. If they call correctly, the attack continues. If they call incorrectly, the attack is negated and the attacking monster is destroyed. . Penance Stare- As long a card with ‘Penance’ in it’s name remains face up on the field both players must pay 200 life points to place a magic or trap card. . The Watchtower- This card can only be activated when ‘The Sentry’ is on the field. Destroy every monster on the opponent’s side of the field and inflict damage to their life points equal to one quarter of the combined attack points. . Wishsong Of The Summer- Both player draw until they have 5 cards. Each player may set one monster as long as there is room. Monsters summoned cannot attack for two turns. During this time, players may tribute the summoned monster to increase their life points by 2000. . Queen’s Penance- Cards with ‘Penance’ in their name on controller’s side of the field receive a defence increase of 700. This card cannot be destroyed as long as there is a ‘Penance King’ on the field. . Time Seal Magician- When this card is sent from the field to the graveyard as a result of battle or card effect, it is removed from play instead. It is returned to your hand during your second draw phase. . Time Paradox- All damage to life points during the periods in which Time Seal Magician is out of play becomes zero. When Time Seal Magician is destroyed this card is also destroyed. . Release- Cards with ‘Penance’ in their name on the field or in the graveyard are removed from play. Summon one ‘Penance King’ from deck and increase attack and defence by 700. . Avatar- This card receives an increase to attack of 200 for every Fire, Earth, Wind and Water monster on the field or in the graveyard. This is effectively (but not exactly) what the cards say. Thanks to anyone who helps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ilikesharks2020 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Wow, that will be hard to correct. EDIT: Just noticed, some of your pictures you used are already in accual Yugioh cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 . Bullseye- Inflict 1000 damage to you and your opponent and destroy 1 card on the field. . Arrow Of Forgiving- When opponent decleares an attack and there is a "Penance Of The King" face-up on the field, the attack is negated and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the "Penance Of The King" ATK. . H.A.M.M.E.R- When this card is Normal Summoned or Set, you can Special Summon up to 2 "H.A.M.M.E.R"s.As long as there are 3 "H.A.M.M.E.R"s on your side of the field, by paying 700 Life Points, your monsters (except "H.A.M.M.E.R") can attack your opponent directly. . House Of Mirrors- When opponent decleares an attack Flip Coin 3 times. If you get 3 Heads, negate the attack and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the demage you would get from this battle. If 2 Heads, inflict damage equal to half of attacking monsters ATK to your opponent. If one head, negate the attack and inflict damage equal to Half attacking monsters ATK to your Life Points. If no heads, the attack continues as normal. . Illusion Castle- As long as any Field Spell Card is in play, the controller of this card can Special Summon DARK or EARTH monsters from their hand without paying any Tribute.(overpowered) . Penance King- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by sending 1 "Soldier of Penance" and 1 "Penance of the King" from the field to the Graveyard. This card can also be treated as "Penance Of The King" for the effects of Spell and Trap cards. As long as this card remains face up on the field, all Warrior-Type monsters on controller’s side gain 700 ATK. This card cannot attack your opponent directly.(I don't get the point with this part) . Penance Of The King- This card cannot be Special Summoned except by removing from play 1 of each Spell, Trap and Monster Card from your Deck. Once per turn, controler of this card can pay Life Points in multiples of 500 to increase the ATK of this card by the number paid. When this card attacks, controler of this card must discard 1 Monster Card from their hand and then Flips a Coin. If the resoult is Heads, the card is Special Summoned during the next Standby Phase. If the resoult is Tail the card is removed from play. . S.H.E.I.L.D- As long as 3 "H.A.M.M.E.R"s remain face-up on the field, all Battle Damage to the controller of this card is negated. When there are no longer three H.A.M.M.E.R on the field, this card is destroyed. Don't have time now to do more Look at this thread: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-141678.html Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Thanks 1q2w3e Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
harrymq Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 cool What's cool? And why has his post been reported, it only says cool? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 cool What's cool? And why has his post been reported' date=' it only says cool?[/quote'] If you want to post in realistic section EXPECT TO GET RATINGS and being rude to people by saying "funk you all" is not to be tolerated. Deal with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 House of Mirrors is a real card you just changed name and effect. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neogadget lord Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I friggin love impossible cannon! cool image for card...but illusion castle is pretty cheap... not that i'd complain if i had it in my darkness deck... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 S.W.O.R.D- As long as there are 3 "H.A.M.M.E.R"s face-up on the field, each time you take damage by your opponent, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the half of damage dealed to you. When there are no longer three H.A.M.M.E.R on the field, this card is destroyed. . Safety Harness- This card can only be equiped to "Penance Of The King". "Penance Of The King" gains ATK equal to that of the ammount of Life Points of te controler of this card. When "The Penance Of The King" is destroyed, while equipped with this card, Life Points go to 0. . Soldier Of Penance- Increas this card's DEF by (insert ammount) for each "Penance Of The King" face-up on the field. This card cannot be selected as an attack target by any Spell, Trap or Monster Card effects or attacks as long as "Penance Of The King"’ remains face-up on the field. The Kings Cavalry- This card takes 3 Monster Zones. This card can attack 3 times. If this card is used as a Tribut, it only counts as 1, expect if it is to summon a "Penance" monster. If any of "The Kings Cavalry" is destroyed, this card is destroyed also. When this card is destroyed it is removed from play. As long as "Penance King"’ remains face-up on the field, this card can attack directly. . Thunderbolts- Negate the activation of an opponent's Spell or Trap Card. and look at it. Choose one of the following effects: *Use selected card as your own *Send the card to the Graveyard. If you select 2nd effect and send the card to the Graveyard, you can use this card as Rageki by discarding 1 card from your hand. . Universal Diversion- All Spellcaster-Type monster gains 500 ATK and DEF. As long as "Chaos Sorcerer" remains face-up on the field, Battle Damage to the controller of this becomes 0 and the attacking monsters ATK is halfed. . Venom- Monster equipped with this card is destroyed during 3rd (Standby/Main Phase) after activation of this card. Any damage to the controler of equiped monster is negated. The you can pay 300 Life Points to return destroyed monster their Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. . D. Hero Musicman- D. Hero Guitarman + D. Hero Songcaster. Select 1 Spell or Trap Card yur opponent controls. Select 1 of the following efects: *Use selected card as your own *Send the card to the Graveyard.(agin same effect) D. Hero Guitarman- Each monster you control gain 900 ATK and DEF (except card). This card can attack only if control no other monsters with Level lower than this card's Level. . Impossible Cannon- Inflict 300 damage to your opponent for each card with "Penance"’ in its name on the field or in the Graveyard. If there are none, Flip a Coin. I the resoult is Heads, inflict 1000 points of damage to your opponent, if the resoult is Tails inflict 1500 points of damage to yourself. . Mysterio- (read orginal ritual monsters for proper summoning conditions) As long as this card remains face-up on the field, all Machine-Type monsters gains 500 ATK and DEF. Each time your opponent declears an attack he/she must Flip Coin and call it. If they call correctly, the attack continues. If they call incorrectly, the attack is negated and the attacking monster is destroyed. . Penance Stare- As long as "Penance" monster is face-up on the field both players must pay 200 life points to active or Set a Spell or Trap Card. . The Watchtower- This card can only be activated when "The Sentry" is face-up on the field. Destroy each monster on the opponent’s side of the field and inflict damage to him/her equal to 1/4 of the combined ATK. . Wishsong Of The Summer- Both player draw until they have 5 cards. Each player can Set 1 monster as long as there is room. Summoned monsters cannot attack for two turns. During this time, players can Tribute summoned monster to increase their Life Points by 2000. . Queen’s Penance- All "Penance" monsters you caontrol gain 700 DEF. This card cannot be destroyed as long as there is a "Penance King" face-up on the field. . Time Seal Magician- When this card is send from the field to the Graveyard as a result of battle or Card's Effect, it is removed from play instead. Removed card returns to your hand during your 2nd Draw Phase. . Time Paradox- As long as "Time Seal Magician" is face-up on the fielddamage to thiscard contoler becomes 0. When "Time Seal Magician" is destroyed, destroy this card. . Release- Cards with ‘Penance’ in their name on the field or in the Graveyard are removed from play. Summon 1 "Penance King" from Deck and increase it's ATK and DEF by 700. . Avatar- This card gains 200 ATK for each FIRE, EARTH, WIND and WATER monster on the field or in either player's Graveyard. Hope this is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marveldude16 Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 House of Mirrors is a real card you just changed name and effect. 6/10 So you mean it has the same picture? :L cool What's cool? And why has his post been reported' date=' it only says cool?[/quote'] If you want to post in realistic section EXPECT TO GET RATINGS and being rude to people by saying "f*** you all" is not to be tolerated. Deal with it. No, his post 'cool' said it had been reported. I wanted to know why 'cool' had been reported. I friggin love impossible cannon! cool image for card...but illusion castle is pretty cheap... not that i'd complain if i had it in my darkness deck... Thanks, I'm glad you like it. Personally I thought it was one of the lesser cards but you proved me wrong :D And thank you once again 1q2w3e Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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