Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I'm planning to make a set out of these cards.[align=center][spoiler=Kabulas Booster][spoiler=Credit]Yangninja Anyways, check out my cards: Effect:As long as this card is face-up on the field, both player's cannot Special Summon Beast-Type or Beast-Warrior-Type monsters from their hand. When a "Kabulas" monster other than "Kabulas Warrior Stronghold" is face-down, you can send 2 cards you control to the Graveyard to select 1 Level 4 or lower monster your opponent controls and destroy it. If you use this card's second effect, and if this card is removed from the field, add the destroyed monster to your hand. Effect:If you control a Level 4 or lower "Kabulas" monster, you can Tribute the monster to select and discard 1 card from your opponent's hand randomly. If the discarded monster is a Level 4 or lower "Kabulas" monster, add it to your hand. Effect:During battle between this Defense Position card and a attacking monster whose ATK is lower than this card's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. If you control this card that is targeted by a monster's card effect, you can discard cards from your hand equal to the Level of the card targeting this card to negate the monster's card effect and destroy it, you gain Life Points equal to the number of cards you discarded due to this card's effect x 200. Effect:Equip only to a "Kabulas" monster. It gains 300 ATK, when the equipped monster destroys an opponent's monster by battle, you can have it lose 300 ATK to inflict 300 damage to your opponent during the end of the Damage Step only. When the equipped monster is destroyed, destroy this card. Effect:As long as this card remains on the field, both player's cannot Summon monsters whose Level is equal to this card's Level. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can discard 1 card from your hand and remove this card from play to inflict 600 damage to your opponent and destroy the monster that destroyed this monster by battle. During your opponent's Standby Phase, if the card your opponent drawn is a "Kabulas" monster, you can pay 1000 Life Points to add it to your hand. Effect:As long as your opponent controls a face-up "Kabulas" monster, all monsters you control whose Level is equal to the "Kabulas" monster controls gain 300 ATK and DEF until the end of the next Battle Phase. When it is removed from the field, both players must remove 1 card in their Graveyard from play. If a player cannot, the player loses 800 Life Points. Effect:Activate only when a monster you control is destroyed by battle by an opponent's monster. Equip this monster to the monster that destroyed a monster you control by battle. As long as this card is equipped to an opponent's monster, each time it attacks you, damage inflicted to you is reduced to 0 and inflict damage to your opponent equal to the equipped monster's DEF. During your End Phase, you can discard 2 cards from your hand to unequip this card from the equipped monster and destroy it. If this card has been on the field for more than 3 turns, it is destroyed. Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 LIGHT monster. During your Standby Phase, if your opponent controls 2 or more Spell or Trap Cards, select 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. You can discard 1 card from your hand to destroy the selected card. During your Battle Phase, if this card destroys a Level 4 or lower monster by battle, you can halve this card's ATK, DEF, Level until the next Standby Phase and discard all cards from your hand to select upto 3 Dragon-Type monsters in your Graveyard and return it to your hand, each of them gain 400 ATK and DEF until the next Battle Phase of the turn the cards were affected by this card's effect. Image credit - wanderley Effect:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 1 Beast-Type monster you control. As long this card remains face-up on the field, all Beast-Type monsters on the field gain 300 ATK and DEF. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all monsters affetced by this card's effect and inflict damage to your opponent equal to each Beast-Type monster you control that were destroyed due to this card's effect x 300.[/align] (Ancient Kabulas Dragon) Gold rarity, gold sticker and advanced holo credit to LiAM! For this the "Ambush" Trap Card, please tell me which Trap type it should be. I'm not sure :? I'm thinking to making around 40-160 cards of this. New cards will be added once I get comments :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakey-man Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I guess that's a good way to start. OCG seems clean, not sure though. OK pic, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thanks Jakey-man :?Any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 good for a start. no errors that i can see. can't wait to see more. ~9.5/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thanks Ovechkinrocks!Will be adding cards in some time... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakey-man Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I rate again :)The 2nd card is really realistic, again the OCG looks clean. 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thanks again Jakey-man :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 only problem with card two is that it looks like it has black bars. anyway ~9.5/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I see. Still the same rate. OK and thanks for commenting again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 very good idea! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 very good idea! 10/10 Thank you very much Baragan :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakey-man Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I rate again.Awesome. Now that the booster has been added, this is great. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 intersting cards !ok!10/10the card are very good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Your OCG is bad commas everywhere and in the third card you said "if this monster attacks a defence position monster inflict the difference etc" instead of saying "This monster deals piercing damage". and in the first card you said the effect activate when you set the monster, you can't activate effects while monsters are set! other than that even if you can activate monster abilities while they are set, you're gonna send 2 cards, so the opponent will know what was that monster. The only good thing I see here are pics. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Your OCG is bad commas everywhere and in the third card you said "if this monster attacks a defence position monster inflict the difference etc" instead of saying "This monster deals piercing damage". and in the first card you said the effect activate when you set the monster' date=' you can't activate effects while monsters are set! other than that even if you can activate monster abilities while they are set, you're gonna send 2 cards, so the opponent will know what was that monster. The only good thing I see here are pics. 5.5/10[/quote'] They are not "everywhere". Lrn2placecommasAlso, you don't have to put "piercing damage". Lrn2OCG as well. This card ignores that rule. Also, there could be lots of cards that could have similiarity of the 1st card's effect. Stop sucking, srsly -_-Thanks anyway though.I've changed it, but next time, Lrnsomegrammar. I normally place commas perfectly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ŞťřïЖЄѓ™ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I'm loving the booster, and I'm loving the cards too! They have good clean OCG, and the booster, just WOW! I rate 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Blaster Rifle's 300 atk gain seems a little small. I'd raise it to 500 atk gain 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Blaster Rifle's 300 atk gain seems a little small. I'd raise it to 500 atk gain 9.9/10Darn I just hate it when I just miss the 10 mark D: Thanks raganarok and ŞťřïЖЄѓ™ :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 No comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Baboon House Gurdian added. No comments? Please rate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 great, a drunken monkey warrior. Haven't seen those in a while. Still feel stats could be a bit higher, but overall it's good 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 great' date=' a drunken monkey warrior. Haven't seen those in a while. Still feel stats could be a bit higher, but overall it's good 9.9/10[/quote']Darn, again I was close to the 10 mark. Thanks raganarok, a lot too :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Adding new cards tommorow. Going to sleep now -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Just got up. And no comments? :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Dark War wolf added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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