cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Hey this is my own stucture deck i made in gimp, it kinds sucks but it was my first 1, the image was a render that i also did in gimpI have made these cards before but i just did them over again, image goes to fatherwolf, so dont say they are overused i know they are, but still someone is going to say overused pics. [spoiler=Monsters] EFFECT:This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 monsters with "Hero" in the name. This cards ATK and DEF becomes the combined ATK and DEF of the cards used to Summon this card. If This cards ATK is over 4000 due to this cards effect, decrease your Life Points by 1000. If this cards DEF is over 4000 due to this effect discard 1 card from your hand to the Graveyard. [spoiler=Spell Cards] [spoiler=Trap Cards] [spoiler=Main Card]EFFECT:"Evil Hero Speed Knight" + "Evil Hero Dark Speed Knight" + "Evil Hero Golden Speed Knight"This card can only be Special Summoned by Fusion Summon. By discarding 2 card from your hand to the Graveyard, you can select 2 face-up monsters on your side of the field with DEF equal to or less then the DEF of this card.. The selected monsters can attack your opponents Life Points Directly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 The Trap Card "Harmful Healing" sucks. I would rather use "Poison of the Old Man" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkrose Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I really like some of the pictures you used here. There are some OCG errors. Imo some of the effects are overpowering, but otherwise not bad. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Very good Pics! the effects are ok. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Bucket of Greed's effect is a little bit too powerful with no drawback Harmful Healing is far too weak. Poison of the Old Man or Emergency Provisions is far better 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 The Trap Card "Harmful Healing" sucks. I would rather use "Poison of the Old Man" harmful healing wasnt suppose to be in there is was a bad card this was card was suppose to take its place Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 That's actually not too bad, a lot like Emergency Provisions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Bucket of Greed's effect is a little bit too powerful with no drawback Harmful Healing is far too weak. Poison of the Old Man or Emergency Provisions is far better 9/10 k i added 1 new card, and harmful healing wasnt suppose to be in there Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 hmm not bad 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 mind writing in the thread what card you added? I don't want to scope through the whole set just for 1 card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 mind writing in the thread what card you added? I don't want to scope through the whole set just for 1 card its in its own spolier called main card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Ok now I see it. Effect is good, but it might be a little too powerful, maybe put a restriction on it, saying you discard two monster cards from your hand, then select 2 monsters on your side of the field with atk less than or equal to the discarded ones, and they can attack directly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Ok now I see it. Effect is good' date=' but it might be a little too powerful, maybe put a restriction on it, saying you discard two monster cards from your hand, then select 2 monsters on your side of the field with atk less than or equal to the discarded ones, and they can attack directly[/quote'] ok that sounds like a good effect, hold on ill change it, its been taking a while to upload cards latley Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lightning Bagon Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 good job 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 it's ok. I'm saying that restriction so you can't just discard like a 100 atk monster, then select a 3000 atk monster on the field to attack your opponent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 it's ok. I'm saying that restriction so you can't just discard like a 100 atk monster' date=' then select a 3000 atk monster on the field to attack your opponent[/quote'] i just edited the card tell me what you think should i add more cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Now the effect looks balanced out So yes, put up more cards for us to look at. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Caeli Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 MY FIRST POST...Eh, there are an evil hero speed knight and an evil hero "dark" speed knight, i think (by the pics) both of them are dark... It is funny. And the effect of the dark speed knight said "Dark-Type":"Dark" it is not a type, it is an attribute. Blood Knight: it should be an Spirit Monster, it has their conditions. the first monster cards are overpowered. I don't hate the pics, but i dont love them, they are ok! 7.8 = 8/10. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Now the effect looks balanced out So yes' date=' put up more cards for us to look at.[/quote'] ok just post them in like a reply or just add them in the thread? MY FIRST POST...Eh' date=' there are an evil hero speed knight and an evil hero "dark" speed knight, i think (by the pics) both of them are dark... It is funny. And the effect of the dark speed knight said "Dark-Type":"Dark" it is not a type, it is an attribute. Blood Knight: it should be an Spirit Monster, it has their conditions. the first monster cards are overpowered. I don't hate the pics, but i dont love them, they are ok! 7.8 = 8/10. Good job.[/quote'] ok thx for the rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 just add them to the thread Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 just add them to the thread ok im working on some now so when im done maybe you can comment on them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I will, just PM me when you're done and have the cards up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I will' date=' just PM me when you're done and have the cards up[/quote'] ok i pm'd you the new cards i made New Cards!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 You also have minor OCG errors, fix them with this list I made: Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ theirmay = canface up = face-up attribute = Attributetype = Typeritual = Ritualmonster card zone = Monster Card Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Evil Ghost Dude's effects for under and over 4000 are a little too bland either way. Should give it a 2nd effect for both cases 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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