))Raven(( Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 [align=center]Well I am shooting idea's in the air to see how people react so here you go! LionHeart - King of the JungleDuring battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent and your opponent discards the top card from there deck.[/align] Idea for LionHeart:It is used to mill the mess out of your opponent.While having the Pierce effect.And if they try to avoid the mill they can enjoy that lovely 2800 Damage. ^-^..[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 2nd effect is a little bit too powerful to the card without a drawback OCG and pic are both solid though 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thx Do you have suggestion's to change it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I'd probably just say for your opponent to discard the top card on his/her deck, then you have to skip your battle phase next turn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 OCG is pretty good 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thx can you point out the errors to make it Perfect? Wouldnt the top card be more than enough?Skipping the next battle phase would be a bit much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Ok we can do that, just discard the top card and that's it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Ok ill update it now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Anyone else Commenting? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 great card. i am amazed at how good you are at card making ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Thx I am a Newb not a n00b. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 good card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 good card 9/10 Any Constructive Criticism?But thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 It's overpowered. It's a stronger version of: Elemental Hero Bladedge. With 200 more ATK and a discarding effect? Abused in a Dark Scorpion Deck and such. Sorry, lower the ATK or add a drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 No need to be sorry.Constructive Criticism has been lacking in this thread. Do you mind to add a Drawback? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I would suggest: ATK: 2800DEF: 1750Effect: "During battle between this attacking card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent. Each time this card destroys a monster, you can pay 500 Life Points to make your opponent send 1 card from the top of their Deck to the Graveyard." Okay, so I added a LP cost, as LP are a lot more valuable, discarding a card is too underpowered to say you would have tributed 2 monsters for this. I also used correct OCG, so you should copy+paste that if you like it. There are many other combinations you could use. Like Special Summon a Token to your opponents field, switch this card to defence position, it has its ATK decreased after an attack, you have to pay 500 LP every turn this is face-up etc.. I chose that one, because its simple and just adds a drawback to your original. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 thx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 While I'm at it, have this mass produced OCG list: Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Position Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Dude Thanks alot =2 rep Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 lol thanks, I'm just trying to spread perfect OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Decent OCG. Nice Pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Why does everybody say that?"The OCG is decent or the OCG is good", but they dont state the OCG errors. Anyway Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 There is a lack of decent ratesr on YCM. I consider myself to be a good rater of cards. Other members will just give a rate and say good OCG. Not very useful nor handy. They're just post count wh0r35. Ohh! +1 post count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Lolz That's True. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I only speak the truth, even if its harsh. +1 post count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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