The Greatness Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 This is the first card of the set: Demons, Bound by Firewhich is in progress. Rate and comment.I recommend you look at the effect from the spoiler. I'm just saying.[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. Discard 1 card from your hand to attack with this card. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you have the choice to inflict Battle Damage regularly or your opponent loses Life Points equal to each monster on the field x200, plus the Battle Damage. If you do not inflict Battle Damage regularly, add this card to your Graveyard and remove it from play, or pay 500 Life Points to send it to the Graveyard, not removing it from play. [spoiler=New holo version, credited to LiAM]PM him for holos, gold stickers, card recolours, booster packs, and gold rarehe does a good job and he's very helpful and very kind. Here is the card: I hope you enjoyed this card and look forward to my set! Rate and comment! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 The effect is confusing and has some phrasing errors. The pic is good. The only thing is don't make duel types. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I just realized I put Fiend... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 You can't put two types, and DARK attribute suites it more, overused pic and OCG needs fixing, effect isn't creative. 5.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 it is dark... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sizex cds Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Since you already started reading you cant stop. I am a spammer, and I love to spam. I live in a nice house. My room is dark, only lit by the light of the computer screen. I have black heads and pimples on my face, and have never had a girlfriend, nor, will I ever have one. Put this in your sig, or something non funny will happen to you tomarrow. Don't belive me? Then go ahead, and ignore it. EDITED - Yankeefan Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 2100 atk is a bit low for this card being lv8, might want to bump it to 2500ish 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 do you think i should make a Bound by Pain, deck insted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lady_Deadpool Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Ill give it a.....8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 you need to give a reason Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 do you think i should make a Bound by Pain' date=' deck insted?[/quote'] well let's see some of the cards first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 “ Since you already started reading you cant stop. My name is Kalena. I have black hair' date=' and green eyes. I am 13. I was abused my whole life. I have no ears or nose, because my parents chopped them of with a rusty fork. I am dead. I will show up in your room in 13 days and kill you by chopping off your body parts with a rusty fork unless you repost this on 5 pages. THIS IS NO JOKE!!!! If you do, something good will happen to you within 13 days. If you don't believe this, just wait and see..." kool pic =']can someone report this person? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Since you already started reading you cant stop. I am a spammer' date=' and I love to spam. I live in a nice house. My room is dark, only lit by the light of the computer screen. I have black heads and pimples on my face, and have never had a girlfriend, nor, will I ever have one. Put this in your sig, or something non funny will happen to you tomarrow. Don't belive me? Then go ahead, and ignore it. EDITED - Yankeefan[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Since you already started reading you cant stop. I am a spammer' date=' and I love to spam. I live in a nice house. My room is dark, only lit by the light of the computer screen. I have black heads and pimples on my face, and have never had a girlfriend, nor, will I ever have one. Put this in your sig, or something non funny will happen to you tomarrow. Don't belive me? Then go ahead, and ignore it. EDITED - Yankeefan[/quote']lolz. btw good card cept for pic slightly overused. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I'm making a "Great Duelist, starter or structure" dek fusing my Doom dragon set, and my DMOT set, once i get image shack working again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mintcookie Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 This is the first card of the set: Demons' date=' Bound by Firewhich is in progress. Rate and comment.[img']http://img115.imageshack.us/img115/9701/160787.jpg[/img]I recommend you look at the effect from the spoiler. I'm just saying.[spoiler=Effect]This card cannot be Special Summoned or Set. Discard 1 card from your hand to attack with this card. When this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, you have the choice to inflict Battle Damage regularly or your opponent loses Life Points equal to each monster on the field x200, plus the Battle Damage. If you do not inflict Battle Damage regularly, add this card to your Graveyard and remove it from play, or pay 500 Life Points to send it to the Graveyard, not removing it from play. [spoiler=New holo version, credited to LiAM]PM him for holos, gold stickers, card recolours, booster packs, and gold rarehe does a good job and he's very helpful and very kind. Here is the card: I hope you enjoyed this card and look forward to my set! Rate and comment! OCG could be better, pic is bad and stretched. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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