Max Darkness Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 [spoiler=The Next Chapter]As Marduk's sword cut through Appolion, both the Forgotten and the Malevolent were destroyed. However, the Forgotten's cities remained and eventually, these were discovered and a new age began. The three largest settlements became known as Agartha, Lemuria and Atlantis.Atlantis was an isolated kingdom berifit of greed. Lemuria, a wealthy and advanced society of magicians. Agartha was the opposite to Lemuria; a culture based on machines and industry; though equally advanced and powerful. All was good in this new age of peace.But it would not last forever. The Malevolent's evil was not to die so easily. The residual hatred and anger that formed Appolion came to rest upon the new cities and corrupted those dwelling within. In Atlantis, the Orichalcos was born and rained its dark stones on the empire; taking the form of the Great Leviathan. The once-proud civilisation fell beneath the waves as its people's souls fell into the darkness.In Lemuria, it possessed men and beast alike and forced the king, Eliko, to be tested to near-breaking point in a series of twisted challenges that brought him face-to-face with the darkness in his being. The mortal prevailed however, and sealed the darkness. Lemuria was not so fortunate. Despite attempting to return to its former glory, the damage was done; and it eventually disappeared like its sister city. So...what was Agartha's fate? Effect: This card cannot be destroyed by EARTH monsters. Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, you can reduce this card's ATK by 1000, until your End Phase. If you do, this card can attack your opponent directly. Each time this card inflicts Battle Damage to your opponent, this card gains 150 ATK. Effect: Once per turn, you can destroy 2 face-down cards on your opponent's side of the field. If you do, this card cannot declare an attack during your Battle Phase. This card gains 100 ATK for each card destroyed this way. If this card attacks a Level 5 or lower monster, destroy the monster with this card's effect without applying damage calculation. Effect: This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:- As long as this card remains face-up on the field, when your opponent activates a card effect, you can pay 500 Life Points. If you do, negate the effect. While your Life Points are lower than your opponent's, this card gains 1200 ATK. Effect: Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if you control this monster on the field, you can equip it to a "Agarthan" monster on your side of the field as an Equip Spell Card OR unequip the Union equipment and Special Summon this card in face-up Attack Position. While equipped to a monster by this card's effect, once per turn, if the equipped monster would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally). (1 monster can only be equipped with 1 Union Monster at a time. If the equipped monster is destroyed as a result of battle, destroy this card instead.) Effect: This card is also treated as a DARK monster. Once per turn, during your opponent's Standby Phase, select 1 card in your opponent's hand and add it to your hand. If this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, add 1 card in your opponent's Graveyard to your Deck. The story continues... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Great cards. Don't see any OCG. I didn't read the stroy becouse it's to late. In last card, I don'y think it's good idea to take opponent's cards, especialy ad them to your Deck. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Necro Pheonix Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Well,Max, i give it a 10/10. Not only do you have remarkable card making skills, your he only member i know that actually comes up with a story for your sets too. Absolutly amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Agarthan Thief's effect is a little simple compared to the others, but it's still practical, and combined with the fic I'll still give 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 I may be a little new to say this, but i think you should add this to your Agarthan Airship:"(Damage Calculation is applied normally.)" or change it to something like: "This card cannot be targeted by Earth monsters." ^ |I probably messed up that but I hope you got the idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkSigner32 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Great everything on these, max. Nice work. Definitely a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dragoncreator12 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Those cards are awesome great story as well, I see no OCG errors and I'd give a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Signer Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 i give it a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Great cards, would you mind sending me the Interceptor image? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Max Darkness Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Great cards' date=' would you mind sending me the Interceptor image?[/quote'] Here: [spoiler=Right Click, Save Picture As] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 These are great.The effects are balanced and useful. They're creative. Your OCG is flawless. And the pictures looks good. (I still think you should be a writer. ;) ) 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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chizuruotohime Posted August 4, 2009 Report Share Posted August 4, 2009 WEEEE~~!! Great cards by Max Darkness~~!!!! Great OCG too~~!! 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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