DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Im sorry for OCG mistakes , and i dno if the effects are wierd...Enjoy =) Comment and rate ! =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Both OCGs are off, and the pics meh Pain's effect seems to do you more harm than good. Hero's effect is a little too powerful for destroying all your opponent's spells/traps. Not to mention you didn't even say from where, so that has to mean from field, hand, and deck. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Ahh lol true true i will edit thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Believe me, if Hero's effect could do that, then 1500 LP pay is WAY too small. Hell, even 5000 LP seems too small Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 OCG errors like the idea of paying Life Points for the same as the ATK points!! Need to re-read your effects abit mate and smooth them out seem alittle rushed, but still good 8/10 good work matey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 il change the damage to 1000 , so it isnt to much and isnt to little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Fine, but you still have to say which spells/traps you're sending to the graveyard Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 EDITEDI have also added it can only be done once on Hero Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Even once it's far too powerful. Since you didn't say from where, just one activation will destroy ALL the spells/traps in your opponent's hand, deck, and on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 oh poo lol forgot to add the new one 1 secthere? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 ok NOW it's more balanced out, so I'll raise the rate to 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thank u lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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