♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 [align=center]Sorry guys I already had this written out but the laptop was being an idiot so when i pressed backspace it did the actual back buttom on the internet =[ so im just going to rate and leave it up to the viewers to comment. Lovely Lady Duelist The Angel of Eternal Heart and Kindness[spoiler=Effect] When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is higher than this card, place 1 Lovely Lady Duelist1 Counter on it (max. 6). When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is lower than this card, place 1 Lovely Lady Duelst2 Counter on it (max 6). Once per turn, activate one of the following effects:1. Select 1 monster on the field. Remove 3 Lovely Lady Duelist1 Counters to increase the ATK of this card by half of the original ATK of the selected monster.2. Remove 3 Lovely Lady Duelist2 Counters and declare 3 cards. If your opponent has any of them in his/her hand or Deck, add the declared cards to your Deck, then shuffle your Deck. Lovely Lady Duelist the Ultimate Soaring Angel of Light and Beauty[spoiler=Effect] This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except when both players have at least 5 cards each in their respective hands and by removing from play 3 LIGHT monsters from your Graveyard. As long as this card is face-up on the field, all Fairy monsters you control are unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Spell and Trap cards. During each of your End Phases, Special Summon 1 "Beauty Token" (Fairy-Type/LIGHT/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) to your side of the field in Attack Position. The "Beauty Token" cannot attack or be used for Tribute Summon. As long as there is at least 1 "Beauty Token" on your side of the field, your opponent must discard 1 card from his/her hand before activating a Monster Card effect. If he/she cannot, negate the effect. Once per turn, each time 1 of your opponent's card effects is negated, activated 1 of the following effects, depending on the card type:-Spell Card: Increase your Life Points by 1000.-Trap Card: Select a Fairy-Type monster from your Deck, Graveyard, or removed from play and add it to your hand.-Monster Card: Select one Fairy-Type monster from your hand or Deck and Special Summon it to the field, ignoring summoning conditions. The selected monster is destroyed during your End Phase. P.S. Thanks a Bunch Ragnarok you gave me a great idea for a new Archtype ^^ of FAIRIES!!! Look for the new Archtypes Lovely Lady ^^ I might do archtypes for other peoples usernames with of course their consent and they choose their type and central effects and other details ^^. Anyways ENJOY AND COMMENT!!![/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeathSDelano Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 cards' effects seems a little OPed to me pics ares good 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Brilliant cards...Long names though! =) anyway on the first card if the cards were in the opponents deck there would be no point of shuffling the cards in the deck , or is it to find out if the dude has the cards. 9.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Leo Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 awesome cards. ideas are brilliant. i don't think these cards are OPEd. excellent cards ~9/10~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 @Death-Yes that what i originally explained x[ but my comp was stupid.@Lost- It takes cards from you opponents deck and shuffles it into yours its not just shuffling around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Got a few typing errors on your first card but Ill let it go as you have just written War & Peace between the 2 cards!! lol. Like the idea of two kinds of Counters!! LLD the Soaring Angel (Sorry I shortened it but I will get RSS if I have to type it everytime lol!!) It is one heck of a good card, but the monster card part being able to summon a monster regardless of summoing conditions is abit OP especially as the ritual card shinato is a Fairy-Type, maybe if you changed it to one of the others like the Trap as there are less of them per Deck. Like i alot...I have some cards based around my pic and name stored away too. Like to see more but shorted effects my eyes hurt 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 @Lost- It takes cards from you opponents deck and shuffles it into yours its not just shuffling aroundOhhhhhhhhhhhhh makes sence now maybe OPed but still AWESOME Card(with a long name) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 Thanks Abbaton ^^ and you can shorten my name anytime ;3 lol. Thats what I also wrote in my original thread before the backspace bi*** slapped me ; . ;. both cards have a tad OPness to them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 if you don't mind me making a joke I will proceed (even though you cant stop me at this point) I would love to see someone with Logophobia read that card.Logophobia - Fear of Words Also to be more serious (or for that matter, serious at all) I believe the Lovely Lady Duelist The Angel of Eternal Heart and Kindness should have its effect change to:"When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is higher than this card, place 1 Blue Counter on this card (max. 6). When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is lower than this card, place 1 Red Counter on this card (max 6). Once per turn, activate one of the following effects:1. Select 1 monster on the field. Remove 3 Blue Counters to increase the ATK of this card by half of the original ATK of the selected monster.2. Remove 3 Red Counters and declare 3 cards. If your opponent has any of them in his/her hand or Deck, add the declared cards to your Deck, then shuffle your Deck." The Red/Blue part really doesn't matter but calling the counters things like monkey1 or monkey2 really doesn't sound good at all. I put my opinion in, if you took offense at any point in my extremely long post, I apologize. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadows-_0408 Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 9/10the effects are nearly flawless but they are a bit OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 30, 2009 Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 @ Redrage - I thought it said Legophobia...thought why would a fear of Lego be a problem here lol!!! Like that going to use that word logophobia. @ LLD - Can I shorten your name to HOT...as in sheet HOT at making blooming cards!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 30, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 30, 2009 if you don't mind me making a joke I will proceed (even though you cant stop me at this point) I would love to see someone with Logophobia read that card.Logophobia - Fear of Words Also to be more serious (or for that matter' date=' serious at all) I believe the Lovely Lady Duelist The Angel of Eternal Heart and Kindness should have its effect change to:"When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is higher than this card, place 1 [u']Blue[/u] Counter on this card (max. 6). When your opponent Summons a monster whose Level is lower than this card, place 1 Red Counter on this card (max 6). Once per turn, activate one of the following effects:1. Select 1 monster on the field. Remove 3 Blue Counters to increase the ATK of this card by half of the original ATK of the selected monster.2. Remove 3 Red Counters and declare 3 cards. If your opponent has any of them in his/her hand or Deck, add the declared cards to your Deck, then shuffle your Deck." The Red/Blue part really doesn't matter but calling the counters things like monkey1 or monkey2 really doesn't sound good at all. I put my opinion in, if you took offense at any point in my extremely long post, I apologize. I didnt take any offense it wasnt me who made the effects. However the names of the counters attractiveness doesnt matter in the slightest :[ (well in my opinion) But thanks for the comment@ Redrage - I thought it said Legophobia...thought why would a fear of Lego be a problem here lol!!! Like that going to use that word logophobia. @ LLD - Can I shorten your name to HOT...as in s*** HOT at making blooming cards!! lol x3 yesh you can ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thomas Wolf Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Very awesome cards. The counters on your first one could get kind of confusing but other than that I like it. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I think the names should be shorter... Use this to correct your OCG, it's generic so ignore the obvious ones: Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFas a result of battle = by battleone/ two/ three... = 1/2/3...attack mode = Attack Positionhis/ her = they/ theirmay = canface up = face-up attribute = Attributetype = Typeritual = Ritualmonster card zone = Monster Card Zone Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◊ Hᵃᵏᵃˢᵉ ◊ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Well.... Liam beat me to the punch. 9/10 They do seem a tad OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pegasasu Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 What is ragnarok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Lol he's my friend who came up with these cards i made them and posted he had all the ideas like the name lvl effect attribute...everything (now dont think he does all my cards cause he doesnt) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saturn of Elemia Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The first card is fun. Love the image and the effect is quite versatile - especially since you can steal your opponent's key cards. That second card is a doozy to get out, but looks fun to use - especially if you can control your opponent's hand. The Token summoning is nice (since they can still be used for Synchros). I feel that its ATK could be a little higher considering how hard it is to get out, but that nice Special Summon effect near the end is BRUTAL! 10/10 8) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 @ Pegasasu - Ragnorak is the Norse mythology version of the end of the world, it is brought about by Loki tricking Odin into starting it...If I remember right!! Been awhile since I looked it up. @ LLD - Im sure being one of the few girls on here you have plenty of "Friends" lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Good cards but the second 1 needs a better pic. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Awsome Cards! :D The last one had a very long effect O.O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Cards are very good. The pics are good especially the first one. The effects are long and creative and i didnt see any OCG errors. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cloister Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The second is bit OPed and there are some OCG errors and sorry, but I dont like the names, they are too long for me, but very original cards that makes me give them 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cmc1234 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 wow these are reallly cool cards, verey long names though9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chizuruotohime Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 those effects are way tooooo loongggg and waaayyy too interesting too~~!! Nice cards~~!! 20/10~~!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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