redrage1993 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Here's my card. Used Solemn Judgement as a starting point and adjusted it. Effect: Your opponent selects 2 cards in your Deck. Remove from play the selected cards to negate an activation of a Spell / Trap Card / Normal Summon / Flip Summon / Special Summon and destroy the Spell Card, Trap Card, or Summoned monster. Shuffle your Deck. Please comment. EDIT: changed 1 removed to 2 and fixed minor OCG errors Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 picture a little TOO dark Effect is pretty good, though it lacks a drawback 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 picture a little TOO dark Effect is pretty good' date=' though it lacks a drawback 8/10[/quote'] do you think I should change it to 2 removes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 That'd be a good idea. Certainly balance it more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I would keep it to one. God Says No requires you to pay half your Life Points. With this card, you could potentially lose your best card. I think 1 card removed from play is a good idea. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 with the pic changed I'll also raise the rate to 8.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The pic could be changed to an explosion, but not a photo obviously. C4D's don't tend to be good images. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Newly edited photo with edited effect.Please rate/comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artix_Von_Kreiger Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The Picture isn't really good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Pictures still not the best, I don't agree with the 2 cards removed. And your OCG could use a little work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redrage1993 Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The pic could be changed to an explosion' date=' but not a photo obviously. C4D's don't tend to be good images.[/quote'] I just thought of what could go with the effect and thats what i chose - a black hole Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Well, it's your card, but some good advice that I'm posting everywhere to help new members: Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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