Rehva Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 [align=center] Failed Attempt [spoiler=Effect] This card can only be Activated if your Opponent attacks you Directly. Negate the attack and destroy it. After 2 turn of which this card's Effect was Activated, you and your Opponent takes 600 Points of Direct Damage to your Life Points. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 A little bit too small of a burn effect, but still a good one 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 YoUr capiTaliZing thE WroNg paRts. Some OCG fixes you might find useful:normal summon = Normal Summonspecial summon = Special Summonspell/ trap card = Spell/ Trap Cardmonster effect card = monster Effect cardgraveyard = Graveyarddeck = Deckhand = handField = fieldatk/ def = ATK/ DEFATK points = ATKremove ___ from play = remove from play ___a monster with "___" in its name = a "___" monsteropponents side of the field = opponent controlsyour side of the field = you controltribute = Tributelevel stars = Levelevery = eachlife points = Life Pointslight/ dark = LIGHT/ DARKwarrior type = Warrior-Typechoose = select???? ATK/ DEF = ? ATK/ DEFOpponent = opponent Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 ^^ Lol Thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 lol it's okay, I'm posting it on every thread hoping people will read it. It's all for the greater good. Some one else will copy and paste it in other threads and then it will be a big chain link effect. Soon there will be perfect OCG! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkrose Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I like the idea. IMO I think you can get a better pic but thats just me. Oh and LiAM I don't know if I can but if I could I would put the OCG as my sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Seriously man, I can read the card better than the effect spoiler u posted, make it a lil bigger. Pic isn't really Yu-Gi-Oh! ish, ur OCG needs fixing too. Good effect though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 OCG FIX: This card can only be activated when your opponent's monster attacks you directly. Destroy the attacking monster and inflict 600 damage to both players. Hmm, a situational card.PIC is quite good.Its good->great. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rehva Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 bumpAnd thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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