Rate/Fix my Horus Deck!!!!!! [please]

[Thewho]

please help me fix my horus deck, I haven't played this game in a while (a year and a half, to be exact) so I tried to come up with a deck as quickly as I could, but I guess it didn't work out to well.

 

I felt old when my friend called me and said, "dude, check out my Synchro deck! it has Stardust Dragon/Assault Mode and all that good sh**!!"

 

I simply replied, "dude, WTF is Synchro?"

 

he hung up.

 

No way man, I'm sticking to my good ol' Horus...she's my one and only.

(ever since Cyber Dragon left me, anyways).

 

Monsters (20):

3x Horus Lv4

2x Horus Lv6

2x Horus Lv8

1x Breaker

1x D.D. Warrior Lady

1x Cyber Dragon

1x Dandylion

2x Mobius

2x Doomcaliber Knight

1x Marshmallon

1x Morphing Jar

1x Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

1x Sangan

1x Spirit Reaper

 

Spells (13):

1x Brain Control

1x Giant Trunade

1x Heavy Storm

1x Gold Sarcophagus

1x Lightning Vortex

1x Monster Reborn

1x MST

2x Level Up!

2x Pod of Avarice

2x Soul Exchange

 

Traps (7):

2x Devine Wrath

3x Royal Decree

1x Mirror Force

1x Torrential Tribute

 

please help, because I'm not completely satisfied with it (back in my day, this deck would have been sick, in the good way).

thanks!

 

P.S. is anybody else sick of Dark Bribe yet? my friend runs 3 of those in his deck, and I feel the card should let me draw 2 cards instead of 1...I needed to get that out of my system.

[Tickle Me Emo]

monsters: [20]

3| Horus lv 8

3| Plasma

3| Horus lv 6

2| Malicious

3| Diamond Dude

2| Blue Thunder T45

1| Stratos

1| Treeborn

1| Fear Monger

1| Grand Mole

 

Spells: [13]

3| Trade-In

3| Dark World Dealing

2| Allure

2| Destiny Draw

1| BCon

1| Heavy

1| lightning Vortex|

1| Reborn

1| PoA

1| RoTA

1| Scapegoat

 

traps: [3]

2| Decree

1| Torrential

 

build that

[Thewho]

BUMP

 

anyone else?