+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Anything to work on? Suggestions? Criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sid. Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Loooks a little TOO cartoonish for my taste. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soul Legacy Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Coca Cola everywhere! I can't take it! D: (Basically, it rules! :D) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dan.Baker123 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 It's great :D and you should pitch to the guys at Coca-Cola, they'd be able to make some sort of commercial out of it or something like that, good job :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The Line around the clouds makes them flying cans 'dar look wrong. Fully scratch, I take it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The Line around the clouds makes them flying cans 'dar look wrong. Fully scratch' date=' I take it?[/quote'] Whatchutalkin'bout Willis? Coke cans were not scratched. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Exyst Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 The Line around the clouds makes them flying cans 'dar look wrong. Fully scratch' date=' I take it?[/quote'] Whatchutalkin'bout Willis? Coke cans were not scratched. :P Oh... That make it look less impressive Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Psh, I don't know how to vector that well. I just started Illy yesterday. >.> Plus, it's a WIP. ;P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 cool concept. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 cool concept. Thanks. Anything I should work on? Zeig on GFXS told me some stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I could write for each sig in YCM or in any place (only inter to novice, semi pro & pro is not my cncing xD) 10 or at least 6 paragraphs. But I'm lazy I don't do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Fine then. D: Anymore comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest KAJN Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I'll just tell you. Use more colour variations, remove those stickmen. building should have more of a definite angle not straight then a break angle. Use a gradient from dark to light for the building's colours. Same for the BG. The cloud that has lightnings, remove them, they do not go with the atmosphere. the thing going around the building, either have it on normal with good angles or remove them. Very pixally D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
+sw.DISZ Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I'll just tell you. Use more colour variations' date=' remove those stickmen. building should have more of a definite angle not straight then a break angle. Use a gradient from dark to light for the building's colours. Same for the BG. The cloud that has lightnings, remove them, they do not go with the atmosphere. the thing going around the building, either have it on normal with good angles or remove them. Very pixally D:[/quote'] You're sexy. I shall now go edit. =D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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