.Gideon. Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I created a new archtype, dunno why but the time I saw those pics I decided to make this archtype. here are the first 4 cards from this set, The archtype is focused on gaining field advantage without using Spells and Traps.These monsters are not affected by trap, or spell cards if you do not control any spell or trap, and each monster has an effect when it's destroyed by battle. I'll leave you with the cards. [spoiler= The cards] When this card attacks, you can discard 1 card from your hand to increase this card's ATK by 400 during Damage calculation only. If you activated this effect, this card loses 400 ATK during the End Phase of this turn. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, you can add 1 "Loxodon Warrior" from your Deck to your hand. The Deck is then shuffled. You can Special Summon this card from your hand when you Normal Summon a "Loxodon" monster. If this card is Special Summoned this way, destroy 1 Spell or Trap Card your opponent controls. Each time this card destroys a monster by battle, place 1 Punish Counter on this card. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, destroy face-down cards on the field equal to the number of Punish Counters on this card. This card cannot be the target of your opponent's card effects. This card cannot be selected as an attack target if you control other "Loxodon" monster except "Loxodon Hierarch". Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 Level 4 or lower "Loxodon" monster from your Deck, it loses 500 ATK and DEF. The Deck is then shuffled. If this card is destroyed by battle, all damage you would take this turn becomes 0. When this card is Tribute Summoned, destroy cards on the field equal to the number of "Loxodon" monsters you control other than this card. As long as this card remains face-up, all other "Loxodon" monsters you control gain 500 ATK during the Battle Phase only. When a "Loxodon" monster battles a Defense Position monster with lower DEF than the attacking monster's ATK, inflict the difference as Battle damage to your opponent. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, destroy allface-up monsters your opponent controls with 2000 or lower DEF. You can Special Summon this card from your hand when you Normal Summon a "Loxodon" monster. Increase your Life Points by 500 for each other "Loxodon" monster you control during your Standby Phase. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Spell Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, you gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that destroyed this card. Your opponent cannot select "Loxodon" monsters you control as an attack target, or as a target of card effects, other than this card. If this card is destroyed by a card effect, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon this card during the End Phase of this turn. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Spell Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, all face-up "Loxodon" monsters you control gain 800 ATK and DEF until the End Phase of your next turn. You can Special Summon this card from your hand when your opponent controls 3 or more monsters and you control none. If this card is Special Summoned this way, you can Special Summon 2 Level 4 or lower "Loxodon" monsters from your hand in face-up Defense Position. As long as this card remains face-up, If your Life Points are lower than your opponent's Life Points, your opponent cannot declare an attack. You must pay 500 Life Points during each of your End Phases, if you do not, return this card to your hand. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Spell Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, your Life Points becomes the same as your opponent's Life Points. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by having 6 or more "Loxodon" monsters in your Graveyard. You can only control 1 "Krinus, Loxodon King". Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to Special Summon 1 "Loxodon" monster from your hand. If this card would be destroyed by a card effect, you can Tribute 1 "Loxodon" monster you control to negate that card's effect and destroy it. Each time you activate this effect, this card gains 500 ATK. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Trap Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, select 3 "Loxodon" monsters from your Graveyard and add them to your hand. Well, I did not put much effort on the names, If you have good names for those cards please share them with me ^_^ Comment + rate peeps. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Well, why not try not to rip the names of Magic, the Gathering cards? You even took the images from Magic's Loxodon archetype... Image credit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Anything wrong with that ?any rule states not to use Magic monsters here ?who the hell give IMG credits these days ? I want useful comments please ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Minor OCG i think: Wrrior - last sentence "Than shuffle your Deck" Hierarch - "it loses 500 ATK and DEF" to "Summoned monster loses 500 ATK and DEF" (?) General - Tribute Summoned Intreasting cards, becouse they are breaking current belief that you can't win without spells and traps, which was created by Yugi. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Ursus Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 So you want a useful comment? Sorry. If you copy this from another game, then I think your should put this in the "Pop Culture" forum. No? I don't know, I might be wrong. For all of these cards: Beast Warrior -> Beast-Warrior Loxodon Warrior: OCG: Damage calculation -> Damage Calculation Effect: I do think this card is slightly overpowered, as it gains more ATK than the other battle-only pumpers, for example Topaz Tiger, who gets a total of 2000 and Jain, Lightsworn Paladin, who gets up to 2100. Even if it does get weaker during the End Phase, it can't be destroyed by Traps just as long as you don't have any Spell or Trap Cards. That to boot, if it gets destroyed, you can just take a new one from your Deck. OP all the way. Suggestions: Lower its ATK to 1700 and put a little cost to the search ability, such as a discard cost, and drop the part that weakens it at the end of the turn.________Loxodon Punisher OCG: Is fine. Effect: This card is also overpowered, as it can swarm way to easily, and take down a Spell or Trap card when it does. The other parts of its effect is also OP. Suggestions: Make its ATK 1500 and remove the Spell and Trap removal part. Keep the Punish Counter part and make it something like "When this card is destroyed by battle, you can destroy Spell or Trap Cards on the field equal to the number of Punish Counters on this card - 1."________Loxodon Hierarch OCG: Is fine, as I see. Effect: This card is more like it. It has an interesting effect with a drawback. Suggestions: You could perhaps remove one of the two first effects.__________Loxodon General OCG: Battle damage -> Battle Damageallface-up -> all face-up Effect: OP all the way. It can destroy alot of monsters when it comes into and leaves play? Plus it gives all other Loxodons 500 ATK and piercing damage? Come on. Suggestions: Remove the first part of its effect and put a cost on the last part. Originality is of course cut down as the names are ripped. The set has potential, but it's not the best I've seen, and it could certainly need more restriction in their effects. A. For now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 hmmm .. good points out thereActually I wanted them to have such powerful effects, for the reason that they do not have any Spell/Trap support cards, and to keep up with powerful archtypes like GBs and LSz about the names, as I said, i did not put effort on them, I didn't even knew they were from MTG. I just downloaded them from nightmarian's archieve and used them with the names given to them, so ;) thanx alot, now that's a useful commentI will edit those cards soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 impressive effects, they do just fine in the times when you have no useful spells/traps in your hand and such 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Thanx ^_^ more comments peeps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Omega Devil, when is the next update card coming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 *Edit: new card added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Anonymous Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 You can Special Summon this card from your hand when you Normal Summon a "Loxodon" monster. During each of your Standby Phases increase your Life Points by 500 for each "Loxodon" monster you control, except this card. If you control no Spell or Trap Cards, this card cannot be destroyed by your opponent's Spell Cards. If this card is destroyed by battle, you gain Life Points equal to the ATK of the monster that destroyed this card. Not bad: 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Both are right thanx for your comment dude, more comments people, ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tainted Wisdom Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I like them, though for Loxodon Hierarch, I would change it to Loxodon Wiseman. It looks more wise than high in power. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Nice cards, but isn't it Beast-Warrior? a 8.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Yes they should be Beast-Warrior and for the name i just put the name of the pic, I'll think of better names ^^ thanx foryour commentsMore ppl, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
◎Kaleidoscope Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Really nice pics, effects, and OCG. i think that "Loxodan Hierarch" would look great with and ADvanced Holo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Thanx for your comment, glad that u liked them ^^ keep the comments comin people , Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 excellent new card. Pic looks very impressive, OCG is solid 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Nice cards. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Thank you both,new card added ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 only its 1000 atk seems a bit low. I'd raise it to 1300ish or something. Other than that it's great 9.3/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I made it low to balance it out, since he can be revived and have Belial's effect. Thank you buddy, new card will be added tomorrow more comments ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Gideon. Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 I like em.The pictures bother me.I dont know why. THey just seem blan.The effects are pretty original. Very annoying for people rely on mirrior force in a pinch lol.And Solemn would fail here too. SO, Ill give you a lovely 9/10 ;p Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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