AbbatonStrikes Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I was inspired to show my cards I made of myself after Lovely Lady Duelist showed hers off yesterday...I know before you all start the pics are from Hellsing, but so is my Avatar pic so...makes sense ner ner!! lol The Eternal Creature, AbbatonEffect- This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a Level 4 or lower monster. During the End Phase of the turn this card was sent to the Graveyard Special Summon it to your side of the field, increase its ATK points by 400, if you activate this effect discard the top of your Deck to the Graveyard. The Eternal Monster, AbbatonEffect- This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Zombie-Type monsters, 1 monster must be level 6. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a Level 6 or lower monster. Add 1 Dark Counter to this card (Max. 6) every time this card destroys an opponent's monster, this card gains ATK points equal to the number of Dark Counters on this card x200. Once per turn you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. Hope you like em please comment and rate CheersAbb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 impressive pictures Eternal Creature's effect is a lot like Vampire Lord's with the atk boosting Eternal Monster's effect I can't read, can you write out the lore? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 Yeah sorry was just gettin it as you posted lol...blooming slow computers GRRRRRr!! is it didnt think to look at that to be honnest...oops Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 should there be a max of counters on the card , and maybe you could destroy a dark counter to destroy 1 card on the field but that might not be good sorry continue lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 there's no max number of counters to the card, and the 100 atk gain is a little low. Make it 200 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 OCG needs fixing. Pictures are unique because I never seen the in a monster. The positive things about this card balances out the negatives.... I say 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I shall make the max 6 or 7, and I shall up the increase too!! thanks for the input..anyone else?? @ TDA-great - What OCG problems please?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 post the effect of the first monsters so i could just copy and paste. then edit from there, lollaziness Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted July 31, 2009 Author Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 I have put The Creature Abbaton effect up if you want to edit it now people...thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted July 31, 2009 Report Share Posted July 31, 2009 are you trying to say, with a Level 4 or lower monster on the field? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I got the way to write the text from Satellite Cannon, so it should be right...its meant to be that it cant be destroyed by a monster of level 4 or lower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Dude, these cards a wickedly cool! And I like the fact that you made them with Alucards pics. Not too bad of effects either. dude, I have to give you a 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 cheers mate always good to get your comments on my cards. I put my comment on yours too!! Have you made anymore of them yet?? Thanks for the 10/10!!! Anyone else rate or comment??? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Tributing 3 Zombie-Type monsters. 1 must be Level 6. This card cannot be destroyed by battle with a Level 6 or lower monster. Add 1 Dark Counter to this card each time this card destroys an opponent's monster. This card gains ATK equal to the number of Dark Counters on this card x100. Once per turn you can discard 1 Spell Card from your hand to destroy 1 card on the field. The first one seems alright but is a LITTLE op'd because it really, can't be destroyed unless it's removed from play... You should make a drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Cheers for the edit TDA!! I shall do them in a little bit. that is very true, I may slip a drawback into that card maybe while its on the field I cant draw an cards during my Draw Phase or I have to discard 1 card from my hand hmmmmmmm Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 whoa that's a unique effect: You can't draw cards on your Draw Phase.... or... When the card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you could discard 1 card from, (your choice, because it has to have your touch) to return to the field and it gains 400 ATK.also don't say ATK points or DEF points just say ATK or DEF. If you add a drawback, I would change my post from 8.9 to somewhere about, 9.2/10-10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I shall repost the re-written cards tomorrow once Im up, but in the mean time please comment and rate away thanks!! :-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 ^^ I love the first card's pic!! ^^ Would you mind PMing it to me? I wanted to use it for a card im working on ^^. Card 1= Amazing!!! It's effect is great and its not OP and its picture is great. Card 2= Love it =P lol ^^ It's got an awesome effect and it also has a good picture. lol no complaints ^^ 10/10!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 LLD is being super sweet today!! thanks darling for a raving review...could do with more of em!! I shall drop you the pic for you to have darling as long as I get first look at the card you are making...is that a deal?? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 Excellent. 9/10. Wouldn't it be "1 monster must be level 6?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yugiohjunkie#1 Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 @YugiohJunike#1...pretty cool is that all I get for my hard work lol. Any chance of a out of 10 please if you dont mind gives me more of an idea then cheers matey @Awesomeuser...you maybe right I shall have to go away and think about it hmmmmmm!! lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 @YugiohJunike#1...pretty cool is that all I get for my hard work lol. Any chance of a out of 10 please if you dont mind gives me more of an idea then cheers matey @Awesomeuser...you maybe right I shall have to go away and think about it hmmmmmm!! lol Not meant to be rude, but the "a" remains lowercase. Thx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 1, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 sorry player just as its a name I automatically upper case it years of being beaten senseless with it in school...like you said no offence meant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 1, 2009 Report Share Posted August 1, 2009 I know that feeling, but if a word does not need to be capitalized, then it is not. My username is like craigslist, the "c" is lowercase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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