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Self Drawn: Magician of the White Dragon: Please Rate


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EFFECT:

"Dark Magician" + "Blue-Eyes White Dragon"

This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Fusion Summon. Once per turn you negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap card and destroy it. This card gains 400 ATK and DEF for each "Blue-Eyes White Dragon" in the Graveyard.


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cool card! :D

first thing is the Effect:

nice simple effect, good effect for the dark magician side, but the BEWD side could use a little touch-up. the 400-gain-per-BEWD-ingrave is kinda dull.

OCG could use some work, like "Once per turn you negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap card and destroy it." should be "Once per turn you can negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it." lol.

pic:

i like it a lot, work on the proportions a bit, and try coloring on the comp, even if u hav to use ur mouse. one of ur best tho, nice job :D

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cool card! :D

first thing is the Effect:

nice simple effect' date=' good effect for the dark magician side, but the BEWD side could use a little touch-up. the 400-gain-per-BEWD-ingrave is kinda dull.

OCG could use some work, like "Once per turn you negate the activation of 1 Spell or Trap card and destroy it." should be "Once per turn you [b'] can [/b] negate the activation of a Spell or Trap card and destroy it." lol.

pic:

i like it a lot, work on the proportions a bit, and try coloring on the comp, even if u hav to use ur mouse. one of ur best tho, nice job :D

 

k thx alot for the rates on my cards

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Good Card but Dark Magicians and Blue Eyes are getting really old. The only thing i want to see of a blue eyes again is a fusion with buster blader. anyways 8.5/10

 

hmm thats a good idea, how about this i will try to make a bewd and a buster blader fusion as a self drawn sound cool?

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Good Card but Dark Magicians and Blue Eyes are getting really old. The only thing i want to see of a blue eyes again is a fusion with buster blader. anyways 8.5/10

 

hmm thats a good idea' date=' how about this i will try to make a bewd and a buster blader fusion as a self drawn sound cool?

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Sounds awesome. Go for it.

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I like the pic alot nice drawing got to encourage young artists!!!I think the effect is abit too close to Dark Paladins maybe if you changed it about abit other then that good card like to see more and more of your drawings in your cards too!! 9/10

 

i have made a bunch others, if you continue to search this thread you will see my recent blue-eyes nightmare dragon

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Neat Self Drawn pic' date=' has a little of Dark Paladin's effect thrown in, combined with the atk boosting ability is well done

 

9.5/10

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ya but i mean it was hard to make an effect monster with a fusion of 2 powerful cards with no effects, you know

 

anyways thx for the rate

 

check out my blue eyes nighmare dragon to, its a self drawn

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