My first Ritual Card

[MujinTengu]

Fixed OCG thanks to 1q2w3e :) and thanks for commend and rate me

 

 

 

Effect:

This card can only Special Summoned by the Ritual Card "The Ship of the Flying Dutchman". You must offer 1 or more monsters whose total Levels equal 1 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. As long as this card remains face-up on the field all the monster on the field, except DARK monsters, are turned into face-up position and decrease their ATK by 400 and DEF by 300. Then increase this card's ATK and DEF by decreased ammounts.This effect is activated at the beginning of each Main Phase of your turn. If ATK of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 400 or/and DEF of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 300 that card is destroyed. When affected cards is destroyed ATK and DEF increase from that card is negated. As long as this card remains on the field your Lite Point decrease by 500 each time of your turn.

Effect:

This card is used to Ritual Summon "Cervantes the Flying Duchmen". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 1 or more .

 

what you think?

[Big Lez]

Well i made a "Astaroth" card..would love having this cards in my deck..I really like them

 

9.8/10

[MujinTengu]

thx dude...I made "Astaroth" too but with other name .

[~RoBoTiClOvEr~]

Very good for a first timer

 

9.8/10

[MujinTengu]

thnx for the rate.

and nevertheless i'm dont really know if my OCG are ok so please if ther are some error inform it to me .

[☆ Master Sami ☆]

OK card for a newbie, though Ritual Spell cards cannot have any effects other than Ritual Summoning they're monster so..

 

5.3/10

[Angel of Silence]

The spell card should only have the summoning effect. Your OCG needs a lot of work. The pics are good. 5/10

[Anonymous]

Look at orginal Ritual Monster and Spell card for proper OCG (Orginal Card Grammar)

Don't point out parts with "-". Write it in contionus line (expection from this are Fusion and Synchro materials for summon).Realistic cards can't be DIVINE.

 

Monster

This card can only Special Summoned by the Ritual Card "The Ship of the Flying Dutchman". You must offer 1 or more monsters whose total Level Stars equal 1 or more as a Tribute from the field or your hand. As lon as this card remains face-up on the field all the monster on the field, except DARK monsters, are turned into face-up position and decrease their ATK by 400 and DEF by 300. Then increas this card's ATK an DEF by decreased ammounts.This effect is activated at the begeaning of each your turn. If ATK of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 400 or/and DEF of 1 or more of the monsters is lower than 300 that card is destroyed. When affected cards is destroyed ATK and DEF increase from that card is negated.

[Lexadin]

OCG is a somewhat off but very nice for a starter. a 7/10

[MujinTengu]

thnx for the render :)

[.:Metal Militia:.]

OCG issn't the best.Other than that nice.7/10

[ragnarok1945]

siphoning Cervantes from Soul Calibur isn't good, though the effect certainly is

 

7/10