New Awesome Cards

[Guest xbon]

 

Edit: My new super awesome, super card.

 

 

Okay so i did what some of you guys said, is this any better than my other cards?

[Champster]

Nice pic on 'Damage Spacecraft', but the others...not so much.

The effects needs to be re-worded, i'd suggest like this for 'Damage Spacecraft'.

"Activate only when your opponent declares an attack with a monster that has 1000 ATK points or higher, The original ATK of that monster is halved until the End of this turn."

 

The rest still need Re-worded, 'Sacrifice union' is underpowered, perhaps instead of Cost when trying to destroy a monster, discard 1 card instead. or just "Once per turn, you can Destroy 1 monster on the field"

 

'Radar' is also underpowered, maybe just 1,000 or 500?

Overall 2.9/5

[Zaca]

The same as what the-champion #1 said and by using radar you can easly almost let your opponent win by 2000 life points and just to put a card from your deck into your hand so make it 500 or something lp instead of 2000. With Sacrifice Union its a great card but not all good with the effect because by paying 1000 lp each time then in the end you would have made your opponent win. 6/10....9/10 with improvements.

[Guest xbon]

new cards

[MasterOfMagicians]

wording and structure is wrong on all of them.

your effect monster's effect is too high a cost, with too low attack, too low a level, and not worth the benefits.

 

Don't cut corners on your cards just to make typing easier. This is a post to make your cards realistic.

0/10

[Guest xbon]

What do you mean by cut corners? Im just trying to make cards o.o, not exactly good on grammar but...

[Yogg-Saron]

He means don't take shortcuts. Like don't you capitalization and stuff. Overall, 6/10. You also could need better pics.

[MasterOfMagicians]

You use LP instead of Life Points.

I give you credit on effort, and some of your images are awesome, however they don't cover up the mistakes in the cards.

Your first one, instead of 1000+ ATK, you could reword as, "with attacks of 1000 or higher"

Abduction can be reworded as, "as long as this card remains face-up on the field, each player can only possess one monster on their side of the field."

Radar can be reworded to, "Pay 2000 Life Points to activate this card's effect. Search your deck for a monster, spell or trap card and add it to your hand. Your deck is then shuffled."

[Guest xbon]

new cards

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hey magician what about these cards...

u forgot to rate them o.o thx tho

[MasterOfMagicians]

Dark Realm-

"Increase the ATK and DEF of all Dark Attribute monsters by 500. Decrease the ATCK and DEF of all Light Attribute monsters by 350."

 

Soul of Ancient Warrior-

good

 

Dark Lord-

special summon, not summon (using a monsters effect to bring it out)

paying 500 what?

 

Dark Lord's Servant-

instead of, "once dark lord is destroyed, this card is destroyed too" reword to, "If "Dark Lord is removed from the field, destroy this card."

do not abbreviate Life Points.

using this monsters effect to bring other monsters to the field is a special summon, not summon.

reword to, "pay 500 life points to special summon 1 level 5 or lowe monster from your deck."

 

Fix

4/10

[Slam Fist]

 

I love the way your cards and my cards turned out hun

[Guest xbon]

Umm why did you post ur cards in my thread... and thanks ........

[devil.dreamz]

lmao nice

[SOUL]

new cards

 

Those are good! I like the pics! 9/10