Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Pleaze give advice cos it mite be too strong but yer just look at it and give advice.Ty! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 pic isn't very good Effect is too powerful. You said when this card is face up, there can only be 1 monster on the entire field. That would basically mean as long as this card is on the field, no other monsters can be summoned Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 which part of the effect? theres like 3And thats an ok pic i can look for better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 the last sentence. You said as long as this card is face up on the field, there can only be one monster on both sides of the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 that 2 powerful? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 obviously. That means no other monsters can be summoned, since this card will represent that one monster allowed on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 so get rid of it? or make it better? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 yeah definately remove the last effect and give it a different one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Your opponent cannot control anymore monsters than you do?something like that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 hm.. nice effect mite do that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 lol i just stole the idea from Kaiser Colosseum Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 -_- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Heres how the OCG should be: "This card can only be Special Summoned by removing 5 "Abyss" monsters from your Graveyard from play. The ATK and DEF of this card is equal to half the combined original ATK and DEF of the monsters used for this card's summoning. While this card is face-up on the field, both players can only control 1 monster." This card was balanced up until you put that monster restriction part on it. This card has the potenial to have how much ATK? Who knows? Cause we havent seen the rest of the set. But say that you toss 5 monsters with say...2000+1800+1800+1500+3000=10100/2=5050Yeah...What monster can you get out with more ATK than that that you can get out with just 1 monster on the field...A few...but not many... So, take out that last part and your candy baby! ;)lol.I like the art (kinda could be better but whatevs)8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 so you wanna see my whole set? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
herbie Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 instead of it having an ATK equal to half the combined ATK of the monsters, what about the ATK being the combined level of all the monsters x100?id rather that then slaving over a hot calculator for hours trying to figure out this cards ATK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 Lol. I agree with Herbie. Cept not x100 maybe like x300More appropriate :D And no...I dont. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 2, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 cos my whole set is awsomeok i chamge for last time cos i get pissed of changing it lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
☆ Master Sami ☆ Posted August 2, 2009 Report Share Posted August 2, 2009 OCG needs work and u really need to remove the last card's effect, pic can be better, but nice card. 6.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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