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Hay guys, i found this in 1 of my sets, and i wnt to see what you guys think of it?

 

[spoiler=Version's of "Phoenix Renewal"]

[spoiler=Old Version]

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[spoiler=Fixed Version (I Hope)]

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[spoiler=Lore]

When this card is destroyed by your opponents Spell, Trap, or Monster Effects while Face-Down. Increase your Life Points by 2000 and draw 4 cards. At the end of the battle phase discard 2 cards you drew with this card's effect.

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Artwork is great.Effect is a Over Powered.

You should make it something like this "When this card is destroyed by the effects of a Spell,Trap or a monster Effect increase your Life Points by 1000/2000.You can also draw 2 cards."

There are some OCG mistakes,but nothing that big.

 

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OP = Overpowered

OCG is bad, Pic is good. and its OP'd

 

Fix the OCG, and dont keep it that powerfull.

Make it like:

 

When this card is destroyed by the effect of an opponent's Spell, Trap or Monster Card increase your Life Points by 1000, you can also draw 3 cards, discard 2 cards at the end of your Battle Phase.

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