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Female Necromancer, rate and give advice *Edited*


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Lore:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summond by Releasing 2 Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field and discarding 1 Fairy-Type monster. While this card is in face-up position you can remove from play an opponent's monster by discarding a Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

 

 

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summond by Releasing 2 Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field and discarding 1 Fairy-Type monster. While this card is in face-up position you can remove from play an opponent's monster by discarding a Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

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This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summond by Releasing 2 Zombie-Type monsters on your side of the field and discarding 1 Fairy-Type monster. While this card is in face-up position you can remove from play an opponent's monster by discarding a Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect.

 

Fix:

 

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Tributing 2 Zombie-Type monsters you control and discarding 1 Fairy-Type monster. Once per turn, during your Main Phase, if this card is in face-up position you can remove from play an opponent's monster by discarding a Spell or Trap Card. This card cannot attack during the turn in which you activate this effect.

 

Releasing is OCG only, isn't used in the TCG. Normally, under unqiue Special Summon conditions, the card states you cannot do it, unless x happens, to make things entirely clear. You didn't state how many times per turn the effect can be used. I'm assuming once, otherwise it'd be horrendously broken. Last sentence is just generally clarified.

 

You appear to have a space after a Fiend in the type. Yours says [ Fiend / Effect ], when it should be [ Fiend / Effect]. Really minor, but w/e.

 

With that kinda effect, I'd tone down the DEF quite a lot, as your card is extremely good for a level 8 Fiend beatstick. None of the other Fiend beatsticks that require the same costs (roughly), have more than 2500 DEF, so I'd definitely decrease yours to around at least 2700, if not more.

 

Picture is good, but can't help thinking it doesn't really match the YuGiOh style.

 

Really original, I like it. Zombie/Fairy co-op? Gotta be one for the books.

 

OCG: 7/10

Pic: 9/10

Balance: 9/10

Originality: 10/10

 

Overall: 8.75/10

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