Neo-MasterX Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 :(Is it good or bad or how?:( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BabaXIII Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 so... you decided to do a flavor text with an effect monster? Also... 4000 ATK for 2 tribute is a little off.... WAY OFF Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Big Lez Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 "defendet the "whatever" for 5000 years" is no effect^^ sorry but this isn't a realistic card0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Baragan Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 FAIL!!! 0/10...sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 OCG fix: "This card's Attribute is also treated as WIND. When this card is Special Summoned, destroy all face-up WIND monsters on the field (excluding this card)." My suggestions: -lower the Level to 5 or 6-lower the ATK to 1900-2300-lower the DEF to something that would fit a Level 5 or 6 -add in at the end: "This card cannot attack the turn it is Special Summoned." It is overpowered as is, try making lower level monsters as they are more realistic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flaring Rose Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 that card is a card of mine... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 OCG needs work and card is not balanced. Why has it got a desciption of the card in the first sentence. Pic is ok. 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultimate_Card_Kreator Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Not very realistic.Dont mix Description with effects.0/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 According to it's effect it would destroy itself since it's treated as wind. Why is there flavor text? And it's stats are too high. Fail/10 sorry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 it has vanilla and effect text in its text, not to mention 4000 atk is WAY too high for it 2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 4000 ATK = OP'ed. It would destroy itself because of it's effect. Flavour text in the first line. 1/10 purely because of how hard I lol'ed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 fail Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gustavosuarez Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 you fail. sorry but do a new card.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nikeaf13 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 i ate a chinse dish called butterfly dragon the dragon was chiken Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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