awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Okay, so this is the completed The Lord's Series set. The cards are based on a mansion, a lord, and his servants. Serveral card are holofied with the GIMP. Please feel free to leave positive feedback. This allows card making to become even better. One card is missing for now. Expect it soon. BTW, the cards are in no particular order. All image credit below. The cards are below: [align=center][spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=Lore (Messenger)]When this card is Summoned, control of this card is switched to your opponent. Return control of this card to its owner at the End Phase of your opponent's turn. Both players can then Special Summon 1 monster from their hand. [spoiler=Lore (Maid)]When this card is Flip Summoned, remove 1 monster from the field from play. During the End Phase of the turn this card was Flip Summoned, flip it face-down. [spoiler=Lore (Magician)]When this card is Normal Summoned, you can pay 1000 Life Points to take control of 1 of you opponent's monsters. When this card is destroyed, return control of the selected monster to you opponent. If this card is in your Graveyard during your Standby Phase, you can discard 2 cards to add it to your hand. [spoiler=Lore (Lady)]This card cannot be Summoned unless "The Lord" is on the field. When this card is selected as an attack target, you can pay 1200 Life Points to negate the attack and return the attacking monster to the owner's hand. When "The Lord" is destroyed while this card is face-up, the ATK of this card becomes 2000. Destroy this card on the 2nd turn its ATK becomes 2000. [spoiler=Lore (Gardener)]When this card is Normal Summoned, Special Summon 1 Gardener’s Scarecrow Token (EARTH/Warrior-Type/Level 5/ATK 1900/DEF 1700) with the following effect: "This card cannot attack or be used as a Tribute. When your opponent declares attack, he/she can only select this card as a target." [spoiler=Lore (Defense Force)]While this card is on the field, "The Lord's" monsters (excluding this card) cannot be destroyed by battle (damage calculation is applied as normal). This card inflicts Piercing damage. When this card is destroyed, discard 1 card. If you cannot, pay 1000 Life Points. [spoiler=Lore (Cooks)]Once per turn you can discard 1 card to select one of the following effects:•Increase you Life Points by 1000.•Increase the ATK of 1 monster by 600 until the End Phase of this turn. [spoiler=Lore (The Lord)]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. The card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "The Mansion." This card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each "The Lord's" monsters on the field. When this card is destroyed by battle, you can destroy a "The Lord's" monster instead. [spoiler=Spells][spoiler=Lore (Pay Day)]Equip only to a "The Lord's" monster. Discard any number of cards. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 500 x the number of discarded cards. [spoiler=Lore (Dinner Time)]Equip only to a "The Lord's" monster. Discard any number of cards. Increase the ATK of the equipped monster by 500 x the number of discarded cards. [spoiler=Lore (The Mansion)]During each of your Standby Phases, place 1 Mansion Counter for each "The Lord's" monster on the field. When this card has 9 or more Mansion Counters, you can destroy this card to Special Summon "The Lord" from you hand, Deck, or Graveyard. [spoiler=Image Credit]All credit goes to the wonderful artists at deviantART. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 The Mansion's pic looks on fire or something, not sure if that's supposed to fit in the style Messenger and Gardener have some blurs to it, but that's probably the holo anyway 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 The Mansion's pic looks on fire or something' date=' not sure if that's supposed to fit in the style Messenger and Gardener have some blurs to it, but that's probably the holo anyway 8/10[/quote'] Ack! I added the wrong Mansion picture. Will fix. Those last two cards did give me a bit of trouble with the holos. I know is not to good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 then can you just do it without the holos? It should make them clearer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Okay done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 yeah see now they look much better, though the Mansion pic is still on fire. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 It's just the lighting. That is a fireplace/lamp I believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 yeah I can kind of see that, it still looks a little TOO bright for mere fireplace though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Greatness Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Um, when you get 12/12 I'll grade the whole set as ONE, but for right now, I'll grade them by category.Monsters: They're balanced, but they could be better in terms of pics and style. Add more power to Maid because it seems like you could add a nice effect. Messenger's effect fits it's name but the picture is weird. Too many monsters, make this set out of 20 and add 2 more spells and 2 more traps. The rest you should add on to monsters.Spells: The mansion is not specific. Equip Pay Day to the Lord's Defense Force and it can be 7100. Discard from where? Your deck? If I knew my opponent could not stop my attacks I would do that. Beat them in a second.Traps: Wait no traps?Um, when you get 12/12 I'll grade the whole set as ONE, but for right now, I'll grade them by category.Monsters: They're balanced, but they could be better in terms of pics and style. Add more power to Maid because it seems like you could add a nice effect. Messenger's effect fits it's name but the picture is weird. Too many monsters, make this set out of 20 and add 2 more spells and 2 more traps. The rest you should add on to monsters.Spells: The mansion is not specific. Equip Pay Day to the Lord's Defense Force and it can be 7100. Discard from where? Your deck? If I knew my opponent could not stop my attacks I would do that. Beat them in a second.Traps: Wait no traps?Ok, he's the rating: 7.9/10 don't mind the two comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 I'm capping the Pay Day to 5 cards. It's as powerful as Mage Power, but does have a drawback. I do have a Trap ready, but cannot find a good picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3Ms Posted August 6, 2009 Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Not a bad set, but some of the wordings aren't completely clear. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 6, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 6, 2009 Not a bad set' date=' but some of the wordings aren't completely clear.[/quote'] What do you mean? I see no OCG errors, aside from misspelling "destroyed" once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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