Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Image Credit to Radiant F.U.R.Y and Wanderley. Fury for the pic Wanderlay for the thread.[spoiler=Card][spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by Releasing 1 "Dark Paladin" and 1 "Blue Eyes Shining Dragon" from your side of the field. This card is unaffected by the effects of Spell, Trap, and Monster cards that designate this card as a target. Once per turn by paying 500 Life Points return 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your Hand. This card gains 300 attack for each Dragon-Type monster on the field and in either players Graveyard. When this card is removed from the field remove it from play. Plz rate and comment. Plz tell me if there is anything i should fix :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 getting those two on the field is no easy task, I'd have raised its base atk higher than 3500 Other than that it's just their combined effects, so it's well balanced out 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thank you. What should I raise his attack to? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjay Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Honestly, I can barely read it. *squints* Ragnarok's right; the ATK probably needs to be higher so that the card is as powerful as it is hard to get out. Remember, this is harder to get out than Dragon Master Knight (MUCH harder, thanks to King of the Swamp), so adjust the ATK accordingly. Other than that, it's up to you. If it remains a spirit monster, maybe make it a little OTK worthy, since so much is put into one attack, or leave a loophole like "Discard 1 card during the End Phase to keep this monster from returning to its owner's hand" or something like that, whatever you want. It's your card, so craft it to your liking. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Honestly' date=' I can't read it. *squints*[/b'] Ragnarok's right; the ATK needs to be higher. Remember, this is harder to get out than Dragon Master Knight, so adjust the ATK accordingly. Other than that, it's up to you.Um... did you not see the spoiler for the lore? I will be editing the atk soon prob to 4000 or 4500. Maaaaaayyyybeeeeee to 5000. Or would that be too much? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
¶nÇØGn¶TØ Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Too much for a Summoning condition wherein the card returns to your hand during the End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 ^^Thanks^^. Btw out of curiosity is this the first Dragon-Type Spirit monster anyone has made? Or has it been done before? Just wondering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rideouter Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Haha, I didn't realize that it was a Spirit monster. I don't know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I wouldn't keep it as a spirit monster. It doesn't seem to fit it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silas Angel Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I wouldn't keep it as a spirit monster. It doesn't seem to fit it. Or worth all that trouble Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Bump. Ill edit it later today. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 good good but you make high the ATK to 4000rating is 9.5/10i think i am seeing the dark magician on that dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Updated Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Good card, I like the update. The image and OCG are fine, and the effect is balanced mainly because of the difficult summoning conditions. I still isn't very playable though. 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Spell Master Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 nice card. not many people can make cards like that from the older cards. 9/10 dude. nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I just realized the picture is just Blue Eyes Shining Dragon recolored. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I just realized the picture is just Blue Eyes Shining Dragon recolored.do you not see the dark paladin or dark magician whatever it is on it? (not meaning to sound disrespectful or anything) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 yeah I did, but it just never clicked in at that time Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 ah ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 MEGABUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ninjay Posted August 14, 2009 Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 Beyond awesome! I very much like the updated card. They should make this. btw, Yamata Dragon was a Dragon-type Spirit monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eury Posted August 14, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 14, 2009 oh yeah i completely forgot about Yamata Dragon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
janlukky Posted August 16, 2009 Report Share Posted August 16, 2009 this looks good..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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