jtop Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 these are the cards in my new booster pack rise of strikers the monsters traps spell :P[/php]please rate thisking strikers effect isthis card gets + 500 attack for each card with striker in its name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silver Slipstream Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I'm sorry to be the one to tell you this but...These are very bad. Your first card has card grammar errors and its name should have capitalizations. Also it is very overpowering. It's picture is bad as well since it has words in it. Your second card has an effect that is unrealistic since it brings a virtual halt for your opponent's monsters which is unfair. Also the picture doesnt fit at all. And again it has card grammar errors. Your third card has still card grammar errors. It needs to be cropped so the words are gone. It's effect is overpowering without drawbacks and a price. Your fourth card has card grammar errors. This card's effect is incredibly overpowering since it is a continuous "Monster Reborn" and there is no price. Also it's picture need to be one without words. Your 5th card. Card grammar errors and please add an effect and find a new picture. Your 6th card. Overpowering and grammar errors. Lower the attack to either 1000 or 2000 since it has potential to gain an extra 2000 attack. Your 7th card. Overpowering since it would most likely be on the field for 1 turn until being tuned to another monster and for that turn it is invulnerable to al but monster effects. Your 8th card. Terrible wording. It's effect's conditions may be hard to achieve but these days with Synchro monster's effect it is much easier and 25 card is very drastic since people will most likely have less the 25 at the time. Your 9th card. It just has a picture disability and card grammar errors and otherwise a decent effect. However it needs a price to it such as "Pay 600 Life Points" or something of the sort. You final card. Please...All that I can say is delete this card. It needs a new picture and it is overpowering to the point of unrealisticness. Overall: Most of these need new pictures and OCG fixes (Official Card Grammar). While others need tweeks here and there to balance them out. A good concept however your first attempt was disasterous. Keep trying however and it will be a very good set. 2/10 (If you send me these cards with their Lore's by PM (Private Message) I can fix them up for you but please do not send them in bulk. Just one at a time will suffice.) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Archelaus Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I'm sorry to be the one to tell you this but...These are very bad. Your first card has card grammar errors and its name should have capitalizations. Aslo it is very overpowering. It's picture is bad as well since it has words in it. Your second card has an effect that is unrealistic since it brings a virtual halt for your opponent's monsters which is unfair. Also the picture doesnt fit at all. And again it has card grammar errors. Your third card has still card grammar errors. It needs to be cropped so the words are gone. It's effect is overpowering without drawbacks and a price. Your fourth card has card grammar errors. This card's effect is incredibly overpowering since it is a continuous "Monster Reborn" and there is no price. Also it's picture need to be one without words. Your 5th card. Card grammar errors and please add an effect and find a new picture. Your 6th card. Overpowering and grammar errors. Lower the attack to either 1000 or 2000 since it has potential to gain an extra 2000 attack. Your 7th card. Overpowering since it would most likely be on the field for 1 turn until being tuned to another monster and for that turn it is invulnerable to al but monster effects. Your 8th card. Terrible wording. It's effect's conditions may be hard to achieve but these days with Synchro monster's effect it is much easier and 25 card is very drastic since people will most likely have less the 25 at the time. Your 9th card. It just has a picture disability and card grammar errors and otherwise a decent effect. However it needs a price to it such as "Pay 600 Life Points" or something of the sort. You final card. Please...All that I can say is delete this card. It needs a new picture and it is overpowering to the point of unrealisticness. Overall: Most of these need new pictures and OCG fixes (Official Card Grammar). While others need tweaks here and there to balance them out. A good concept however your first attempt was disastrous. Keep trying however and it will be a very good set. 2/10 THIS^^ but, I'll rate 4/10. Have a nice day. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Contamination's pic is terrible Most effects are OPed, bland, along with the OCG errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cok_pis_bakar Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 4/10 :( you need work ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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