fireheart23232 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 [attachment=12420]I figure that if I having been going around judging peoples cards it was time to put up or shut up. so here you go my first card i am posting hop you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 It's got some card grammar errors, but not bad for a first go. Correct term for your opening effect would be "This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle", you use Life Points, not Lp, Main Phase needs capitalization, and it's a bit overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
narutoman723 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 Don't listen to Vainziler he picks up on EVERY SINGLE grammar ERROR. mistype or what have you. He will even pick up the fact that I didn't capitalize the 'M' in mistype, before he reads this far. He is just a pain, good job on the card by the way! A certain 9/10! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VainZiler Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I got into this with one member, I'm not getting into this with another. Realistic Cards section, as well as Finished Card Sets and Pop Culture cards, unless otherwise stated, are designed for posting card gramatically (sp?) correct cards. I'm not the only ones that picks up on these things, just one of the more active people that do. That's all I got to say on the matter, shall we get back to the topic at hand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Saboooom Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I give this card a sturdy 8/10. Not bad for your first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fireheart23232 Posted November 17, 2007 Author Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 WOW thanks guys!! I never thought my first card would go over this well. To tell the truth this is not my first card i have a bunch on my computer using the old card maker. Soon i will post my other cards in hope to get them on God Kazes' archive of archives.Also if you have not all ready guessed this is from the TV show Heros. I will be making an entrie set about Heros soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rjt65657 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 nice card but only a 3/10 from me as it was underpowered 4 a lvl 7 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 It's pretty good for your first 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cutipi97 Posted November 17, 2007 Report Share Posted November 17, 2007 I give this card a sturdy 8/10. Not bad for your first card. couldnt have said it better myself. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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