legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 I have figured out how to do this, so if you want me to put on a basic BG I will, I guesse open a shop....I think. Its a first time so please dont be to harsh, constructive criticism. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kvin146 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Eh, pick is okay OCG is off2/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
))Raven(( Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 It's good up until it is a 4 * with 2000 ATKLower it to 1700-1800 ok 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 You should lower its ATK and there are some OCG errors.4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 well, its more for pic but ifyou can point out ocg I will fix and also 200 and 500 from a diff monster, forgot to change, hold on a moment I will fixFixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Death's Seduction Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 i like it 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Prodigy101 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 ATK too high, pic is ok 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Great! ^_^ As for the pic, try to use GIMP to smudge some of the pixelated areas, and try to make the actual dragon take up more space in the pic. ;) When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can pay 200 Life Points to return this card to the top of your Deck. The Deck is then shuffled. Perfectly balanced. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zkaiser Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Depending on what you want from this card the OCG should be one of these four: 1: When thus card is sent to the graveyard, you can pay 200 life points to return it to the top of your deck. 2: When thus card is sent to the graveyard, you can pay 200 life points to return it to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. 3: When thus card is sent to the graveyard, pay 200 life points to return it to the top of your deck. 4: When thus card is sent to the graveyard, pay 200 life points to return it to your Deck. Then shuffle your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Lord Symetry:I have made atk ballancedFuzzie:THANKS, FIXED!Zkaiser:Errr Thus? and I have used fuzzies fix Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bengal Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Not bad, the image isn't the greatest, I think the dragon should fill more of the frame because it looks fine. The OCG is alright now, and it is fairly balanced. The effect isn't too creative but it is playable. 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Cheers, if you can paste a link to an image that has no BG I will try and make a card with BG, just to try again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 The OCG on the card is fine, no need to change it. I think you could pay 500 LP instead of 200. The only thing that is bad is the pic. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Dark Megacyber Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 The fixed effect:"When this card is destroyed and send to the Graveyard, you can pay 200 Life Points to return it to your deck"Place it on the top of your deck and then shuffle it is the same as return it to the deck.7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Wow thanks, listen I like bakuura and marik so they will pop up sometimes, like in my new one I did BG for, CREDIT TO DEVIANART Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryanboy Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 3/5 6/10 Eh. I would say the OCG isn't too bad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 err I will take that you said 3/5 and 6/10 for both yes? or in total? and TY Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 both card effects are balanced, though the 1st one's picture is terrible :( 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angel of Silence Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 The first one needs a better pic but otherwise they are pretty good. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
awesomeuser Posted August 7, 2009 Report Share Posted August 7, 2009 Work on your OCG. I like the backgrounds. 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Made dragon bigger, now takes up most of card,Added a mech card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legofreak098 Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Added another magic card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 5/10nothing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 the mech's 2500 def is too much for lv6, reduce it. Pic isn't very good either 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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