Catman25 Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 [align=center]I felt like splicing. [/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stunnero101 Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 lol kool splice Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 it is good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Thanks. Any suggestions/tips? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeroshot Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thanks. Any suggestions/tips? For the sake of importance' date=' I am going to use large red letters: [b']NEVER MIRROR ANY PART OF ANY SPLICE[/b] It's the source of your shading problems. Other than that, you have some placement issues with the arms. You see, they are both behind the body (granted it would be easier with proper arms). One arm (The left one would be the better choice in this case) it should be pasted over the border sligtly, like this: If that doesn't make sense, please tell me. (Jappio gets to use pictures and I wanted to. The only difference is Jappio knows what he's doing) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 I think you should've moved the head to the right a little bit, it looks like the head isn't apart of the body. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shendelzare Silkwood Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 You do splices?Anyway, like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 10, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 Thanks. Any suggestions/tips? For the sake of importance' date=' I am going to use large red letters: [b']NEVER MIRROR ANY PART OF ANY SPLICE[/b] It's the source of your shading problems. Other than that, you have some placement issues with the arms. You see, they are both behind the body (granted it would be easier with proper arms). One arm (The left one would be the better choice in this case) it should be pasted over the border sligtly, like this: If that doesn't make sense, please tell me. (Jappio gets to use pictures and I wanted to. The only difference is Jappio knows what he's doing)Yeah I think I heard that before, but I failed to listen. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raelen Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 These are all of the things that I can see: 1. You mirrored the arms. Tsk, tsk. 2. There's a misplaced dark red pixel in the middle of the ring around the neck. 3. I personally think that the right side (our right) of the splice where the arm is is too straight. The border for the side is just a straight black line. That is because you erased Buizel's arm and made your own border. Try making it have a little more shape. It's just a bit too straight as it is. 4. Needs more shading on the light patch on Buizel's belly. Otherwise, good job! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Tiger Posted August 10, 2009 Report Share Posted August 10, 2009 You shouldn't have mirrored the arms. =/ Other than that it's pretty good. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blaze. Posted August 12, 2009 Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 These are all of the things that I can see: 1. You mirrored the arms. Tsk' date=' tsk. 2. There's a misplaced dark red pixel in the middle of the ring around the neck. 3. I personally think that the right side (our right) of the splice where the arm is is too straight. The border for the side is just a straight black line. That is because you erased Buizel's arm and made your own border. Try making it have a little more shape. It's just a bit too straight as it is. 4. Needs more shading on the light patch on Buizel's belly. Otherwise, good job! ^_^[/quote'] This is what i was basically going to say, but if you aren't looking at advanced things (like the ONE wrong pixel on his neck...) then you did an awesome job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Catman25 Posted August 12, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 12, 2009 Oh I see that pixel now. xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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