HitoKage Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Another fun card I felt like posting. (Don't forget my Trio's Uprising set.)You have to admit, the original picture does look like an Akatsuki member.original- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blackwing_-_Vayu_the_Emblem_of_Honororiginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Arcane_Apprenticeoriginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Eradicator_Warlock + http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Miracle_Flipperoriginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Magical_Exemplaroriginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Dark_Red_Enchanteroriginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ice_MasterSorry about the top of the picture, can't fix it.original- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Splendid_Venus[spoiler=Lore]This card is treated as a Normal Monster while face-up on the field or in the Graveyard. While this card is face-up on the field, you can Normal Summon it to have it be treated as an Effect Monster with this effect:●All non-Warrior-Type monsters lose 500 ATK and DEF. The activation and effects of your Spell Cards cannot be negated. orgiinal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Sorcerer_of_Dark_Magicoriginal- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_Summoner[spoiler=lore]Once per turn, during your opponent's End Phase, you can pay 500 Life Points to Normal Summon or Set 1 Warrior-Type monster from your hand. Once per turn, if this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed. (Damage calculation is applied normally). original- http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tour_of_Doom Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 I think it should have an effect. Also, this should go either to Junk Card Thread or more likely the Any Other Cards Section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Yu-gi-oh is Pop Culture and so is Naruto.I might give him an effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 8, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Effect added, has to do with BenTennyson's monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitty Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 it's good.. i like.. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Add "from play" to the very last sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Whoops, changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Also, there is a dash after "winged" in Winged-Beast. Like that. Not much of a problem though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Also' date=' there is a dash after "winged" in Winged-Beast. Like that. Not much of a problem though...[/quote']http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blackwing_Armor_MasterNo dash. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Oh. Oops. Well, I'm not sure about the "any and all" part. I think it's just "all". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Oh. Oops. Well' date=' I'm not sure about the "any and all" part. I think it's just "all".[/quote']Don't worry about it, I would've made the same mistake.http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Level_up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 *sighs*Well, I'm off to read the OCG thread again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Lo...what was that last letter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Huh? ...wati... That's mean... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Huh? ...wati... That's mean...Sorry, wasn't trying to be mean, trying to make a joke.You made 2 OCG error corrections and then said you were going to read the OCG thread, thought you were trying to make a joke... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 ...I know... Lol, that's also why I spelled wait wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 ...I know... Lol' date=' that's also why I spelled wait wrong.[/quote']...Your mean!...just kidding.Frist OCG, now Grammer...*sigh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Symbiote Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Which is basically the same, but one applies to cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 [align=center]Pretty nice card.I like it.8.2/10 :)[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~ BT Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 I think you should just say remove from play the "Pain - Deva Path" you control. My Pain specifically says 'You can only control 1 "Pain - Deva Path" But I like the way you made a support card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Changes made. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lost Soul Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 A little to weak. You should add some more ATK and DEF and make a higher level, but that is my opinion. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 A little to weak. You should add some more ATK and DEF and make a higher level' date=' but that is my opinion. 8/10[/quote']I tried not to change it too much from the original, but still add the Akatsuki flare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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