jimbopimbo Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Okay so i looked at the OCG Grammer and made this card so i think that i have no OCG errors so please leave comments and rate :) Effect:During your Battle Phase, this Monster Card gains 100 ATK for every Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per turn you can return 1 card you control to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarkHorus16 Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Nice pic, but card is overpowered. I know the OCG is incorrect, but if I try to fix it I'll probably get it wrong :( Altogether 8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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PANDORUM™ Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Ok this card is overpowered.Heres a fix:Level=8Pic=no change it's goodATK/DEF=keep them as they are Effect fix:During your Battle Phase, this Monster Card gains 100 ATK for every Trap Card your opponent controls. Once per trun you can return 1 card you control to your hand.(i think i fixed it properly) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ankka Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 8/10The effect is really owerpover. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Lily Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 [spoiler=Correct OCG:]During your Battle Phase, this card gains 500 ATK for every Trap card in your opponent's Graveyard. During your End Phase, you can return 1 face-up monster card you control to your hand. I believe that to be the Correct OCG. Dunno if it is though, chances are that it is. Anyway, the pic is good and not overused, so kudos for that. The OCG is quite good for someone as new as you. I give you a fair 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kotaro Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 Pragboy, if it would be that, Monster Card is capitilised. To the card, it is OP, maybe decrease the amount to 200 or 300. Every=Each. Pic is ok, 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Bengal Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 The above OCG looks good, only one more thing: every = each Not bad, the image is alright even though I have seen it many times, and the effect is a bit overpowered. I would lower the 500 to around 100 and take out "you can" in the last sentence. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 8, 2009 Report Share Posted August 8, 2009 without any drawbacks this card is too powerful. Should have said for each turn you can return a card to your hand you'd have to skip your battle phase or something 7.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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