First three cards of my first set :)

[jimbopimbo]

Okay i've decided to start on making a card set called 'Hall Of Leaders'

and here are my first three cards for the set i just need some advice on things i should improve on :)

 

 

Effect:

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, while this card is in DEF position, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of this card. Then you can increase your Life Points by the same amount of damage you inflicted to your opponent. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

 

Effect:

During your Battle Phase, increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every Trap card in your opponents Graveyard. During your End Phase, you can select 1 monster you control and return it to your hand.

 

 

Effect:

Every time a monster is Summoned, increase this cards ATK by 100.

or

Once per turn, during the Battle Phase, if either player Summoned a monster this turn increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase.

[Neo-MasterX]

the last could be a bit higher atk

but however for the begin not bad

7.5/10

[DarkHorus16]

Pretty Good for your first 3 cards

8/10 :)

 

Now for the OCG and effect balancing:

 

Water Mammal Ooze

Once per turn, during your Main Phase, while this card is in DEF position, you can inflict damage to your opponent equal to half the original ATK of this card. Then you can increase your Life Points by the same amount of damage you inflicted to your opponent. If you activate this effect, this card cannot declare an attack this turn.

 

Drensam The Powerful

During your Battle Phase, increase the ATK of this card by 100 for every Trap card in your opponents Graveyard. During your End Phase, you can select 1 monster you control and return it to your hand.

 

Leader Of Predators

Atk:2200 Def:1900

Every time a monster is Summoned, increase this cards ATK by 100.

or

Once per turn, during the Battle Phase, if either player Summoned a monster this turn increase the ATK of this card by 500 until the End Phase.

[ragnarok1945]

Water Mamamel Ooze like Total Defense Shogun, not bad. The 200 LP increase is a bit too small though

 

8/10

[jimbopimbo]

UPDATED

[Big Lez]

these are your first three cards..GREAT JOB, DUDE!

 

its a rarity to see good cards from a Newbie...well done,

 

8/10 + 1.5 newbie bonus

9.5/10 ;)

[ragnarok1945]

ok with the modifications I'll raise the rate to 8.9/10