rate plz

[nikeaf13]

rate plz

8)

[ragnarok1945]

bland effect, but at least it's practical

 

8/10

[WTF]

OCG bad

 

effect is dull

 

pic is good

 

4/10

[DarkHorus16]

Here's OCG:

 

This card returns to your hand during the End Phase of the turn it is Summoned. This card gains 300 ATK for every card in your opponents hand.

 

The bold text is there because all Spirit monsters return to your hand at the end of the turn they are summoned. Altogether 7/10 :)

[Alcander]

in the type of the card you wrote: warrior- Warrior, pic is good.

Correct OCG:

This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card returns to the owner's hand during the End Phase of the turn that it is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned or flipped face-up. When this card is face-up in Attack Position this card gains 300 ATK and DEF for each card in your opponent's hand.

( if this is correct then is OP'ed for me)

5/10 keep trying.

[╬「Selatcia」╬]

It should be an Effect Monster. Not a Spirit.

 

Also, it's overpowered. Maybe change the ATK gain to 100 instead of 300.

 

And, as the above said, the effect is meh-ish.

[DarthSuhail]

OP'ed , OCG bad i think

[Alcander]

Here's OCG:

 

The bold text is there because all Spirit monsters return to your hand at the end of the turn they are summoned. Altogether 7/10 :)

 

dude, that's wrong, Spirit Monsters cannot be Special Summoned, and summoned means all types of summon.

[nikeaf13]

tnx guys im just makeing random cards and working my way up to be better