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jacobmarioman

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Original idea

Effect has almost perfect OCG

Fair and balanced effect and stats. Well done!

 

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Minor: Capitalize the name e.g. Captain Underpants

Might need a background for the image

Effect has a couple errors

Fixed:"While face-up, this card cannot be destroyed by effects from Monster and Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard."

 

Aside from that, it is pretty good. 7/10!

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Original idea

Effect has almost perfect OCG

Fair and balanced effect and stats. Well done!

 

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Minor: Capitalize the name e.g. Captain Underpants

Might need a background for the image

Effect has a couple errors

Fixed:"While face-up' date=' this card cannot be destroyed by effects from Monster and Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard."

 

Aside from that, it is pretty good. 7/10!

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Lets fix this ^

 

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Original idea

ATK/DEF is balanced with Level

 

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Bad OCG

Pic NEEDS background

 

3/10 for effort.

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Original idea

Effect has almost perfect OCG

Fair and balanced effect and stats. Well done!

 

-

Minor: Capitalize the name e.g. Captain Underpants

Might need a background for the image

Effect has a couple errors

Fixed:"While face-up' date=' this card cannot be destroyed by effects from Monster and Trap Cards. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to remove from play 1 monster in your opponent's Graveyard."

 

Aside from that, it is pretty good. 7/10!

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Lets fix this ^

 

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Original idea

ATK/DEF is balanced with Level

 

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Bad OCG

Pic NEEDS background

 

3/10 for effort.

 

^Then lets add to this.^

sorry only negative

- Try not to use fake types, some members will point that out sooner or later.

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