soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Hi this is my first go at making cards, I tried to make them well balanced so I hope you all like =) If your Life Points are lower than your opponent's, the origonal ATK of this card is doubled. If your Life Points are higher, the ATK is halfed.Flip: When an opponent's monster attacks this card increase your Life Points by the attacking monster's ATK points. If your Life Points are lower than your opponent's, the origonal DEF of this card is doubled. If your Life Points are higher, the DEF is halfed. As long as this card remains face up of the field, this card cannot be targeted by Spell or Trap cards. Sacrifice half of your Life Points once to double the attack of this card. For every Spirit Sister card in your Graveyard, this card gains 500 points to ATK and Def. When this card is sent to the graveyard as a result of battle, move 2 "Spirit Sisters" from your deck to your hand. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
QuimicVital Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 5/10meh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AbbatonStrikes Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 If you put the name of a card into the text you put "Dark Dragon" quote marks around it like that...okely dokely? I can sort of see what your going for effects that rely on on Life Points like the Planet/Fairy cards Mamrs, Mecury etc...not been done much, good ideas just need to work on the effects make em abit more interesting. Keep trying you will get there matey 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Spirit of Dreams pic looks best As for Spirit of the Knight, I'm surprised you didn't make it a spirit type monster given its effect 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Aww thanks guys, ill change spirit of the night to spirt type monster then =) Still thinking of effects, these are just prototype versions ill send the full set in when I get more ideas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 see that's the thing with that card, you must mean Spirit in its name, and not a spirit type monster or something. A spirit card as you wrote will include BOTH, and that makes it OPed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 see that's the thing with that card' date=' you must mean Spirit in its name, and not a spirit type monster or something. A spirit card as you wrote will include BOTH, and that makes it OPed[/quote'] Fixed it, thanks for pointing that out =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Careful, with your other cards you can change them back to spellcasters now. Remember, a spirit type monster can't be special summoned and will return to your hand during the end phase it's normal summoned, and none of your other spirit sisters do that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Careful' date=' with your other cards you can change them back to spellcasters now. Remember, a spirit type monster can't be special summoned and will return to your hand during the end phase it's normal summoned, and none of your other spirit sisters do that.[/quote'] Think ill change them back to spell casters then :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 you do that, and will there be more spirit sister cards later? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 you do that' date=' and will there be more spirit sister cards later?[/quote'] Well its part of a life points deck im making, these are the Spirit Sisters, but there will be fusions, ect. The next set are the past present and future brothers. Time Brother Present Time Brother Past Time Brother Future All are going to have very cool effects :P there will also be elder spirits, it should be a very cool little set of cards =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 nice cards nice picsI´m going to give you 8/10ok! good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mordred.jr Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 awesome 9/10 keep workin on ur set Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
regalsword65 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 1st one is pretty much a Monster card version of Megamorph only it benefits itself. I'd say Good Job! 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 you do that' date=' and will there be more spirit sister cards later?[/quote'] Well its part of a life points deck im making, these are the Spirit Sisters, but there will be fusions, ect. The next set are the past present and future brothers. Time Brother Present Time Brother Past Time Brother Future All are going to have very cool effects :P there will also be elder spirits, it should be a very cool little set of cards =) impressive, then I look forward to seeing them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 9, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 hehe ill be making some more tonight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WTF Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 ive used all of those pics meh 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ornithopter Posted August 9, 2009 Report Share Posted August 9, 2009 Good job! 8.5/10 Pics are good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soladragon Posted August 11, 2009 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 Good job! 8.5/10 Pics are good Thanks :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neo-MasterX Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FAD Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 The cards are going straight into the forbidden/limited card list (as forbidden of course) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zauls Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 These cards are not very good overall, the pics aren't bad but the effects are dull and the OCG is pretty poor. Try looking at the OCG thread to get a nice idea on how to word your cards.Overall 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FAD Posted August 11, 2009 Report Share Posted August 11, 2009 The cards are going straight into the forbidden/limited card list (as forbidden of course) Names 7/10Pictures 8/10 (you like the girls eh?)Realistic effects 2/10 (although amazing they're too powerful to be normal cards)Powerful effects 10/10 (17/10 if possible)Way the effects are written 7/10 (ORIGONAL???) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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